Ivan Bouldershoulder didn't lose his arm his brother Pickel did.

I don't mean to be picky but I thought elves in the Forgotten Realms couldn't hybrids of different subraces, only one or the other, and it seems your Mir is one such case.

Nice. I do wish you would stop with the blasted cliff hangers! *mutters in frustration*

“With regards to things that may affect survival, yes” Mirandaline commented.

“With regards to things of mere trivia, like Araevin's eyes and how they got that way, no” Teilla quipped. “Although I would dearly love to hear that tale.”

What a clever pair Mir and Teilla make.

The skirmish scene was good and Mir's hertiage is very intriguing.

The elf "aura" was a little confusing for me. I started reading it and started thinking about the 'dying eyes' thing that go though in thier twilight years... but that is probably nowhere near what was being talk about.

My comment was for this chapter... sorry. Your heroes seem different, which I really like.

Good opening chapter... could have used the atomsphere of the tavern a little more. I was sort of wondering how an elven tavern would be seem.

Ok, what is going on here?! Who's the spy?! Is it the elf who was carrying scrolls? Is the spy Areavin's confidant? Or is Maresa? Please answer quickly with a new chapter!

The plot thickens! The potential of Maresa recognizing Mirandaline as the drow that Araevin's still grouchy about while still in Myth Drannor would be just the delay that Sharnar's cronies would need to catch her. :P Hopefully she doesn't put the pieces together until they're decently ahead, and don't have to give a full account of themselves and Mir's presence to the leaders of the army. *sigh* Politics.

I want to see the fruits and flowers of this plot, I do...

Just so you know, I don't care how long this story gets I just want to find out what happens. The quality of the story in continuous and as good as ever. Keep it up!

Oh, when you bring Araevin back in please play nicer with him. He's had a year to calm down.

Yay, a treat! :D

I feel an upswing in events again! Now, to see what Mirandaline and company manage to encounter en route to Myth Drannor, this will be interesting. And five pounds of truffles for espionage, lol. *sudden image of Valas sitting smugly as he noms all of the truffles*

A treat? Not necessary, this fiction is quite a treat in itself. :)
Please keep up the lovely work, Lady Fellshot!

I like where the stories going. Valas Hune is a member of Bregan D'aerthe isn't he? After all by this time theres only one Oblodran left. Poor him.

Long stories really aren't that bad at all. It gives the characters more room instead of being speed up like a demented clock. I hope Aeravin has calmed down, if he mets Mir again. Please play nicer with him.

Oh, I'm surprised you didn't mention Drizzt again. Why would he just leave Catti, Ivan and that dwarf-druid in a holding cell. Oh, well serves her right. You might want to know that I was refering to Catti as 'Lawfull Good'. Ricardt seemes more like a Lawfull Neutral, or a Neutral Good.

The prank was unnesasary, but highly amusing. It helped to lighten up the darker atmosphere created by the last few chapters. I think you caught Catti-brie's reaction in the situation perfectly, jez Lawfull Good people are irriating. So are Chaotic Evil, but that's beside the point. Which I have lost.

A good fine chapter, and keep up the good work.