I think you write Mickey and Zain's friendship really well. And the ending was GOOD. I love how you brought Zain's family in and made them all disapproving and mean (which his dad pretty much is) especially since you hadn't seen any eps of Zain undercover when you wrote it and his family turning up happened after it!

Aw i really liked the whole friendship between Micky and Zain, i thought Are you gonna do a sequel lol??! Laura x

Heya,
Well done, I loved this fic. You've written Zain really well again and Mickey too. I think you captured their friendship really well and its a shame that the show didn't make more of their relationship. I liked the ending but it kinda calls out for a sequel. I'm not dropping hints, no...not me!
Glad to know that your muse is back and that you have more TB and Zain centric fics in the works! I'm even happier to see that you're not going to include Kristen Shaw! I had a lapse in judgement and actually liked her for all of about two weeks. I'm still not even sure why!
I liked the hint of Rahasia in this fic too. I'm looking forward to seeing their relationship and her character develop. Right, I'm going to stop before I bore you to tears!
Thanks for your review on YNM, the sequel is going pretty well and the first chapter should be up in the next fortnight or so.
Vikki x

wow so gd lvu it plez ud soon. luv ya Sarah