please continue this story..:)

its a shame u given up on this story, the story line is very interestin. wrote it well upto this point

I love it, and the kitty seen with Sasuke lol UPDATE SOON!
LOVEE SAUSKE TORTURE!!, MORE OF IT PLEASE!

I love it, and Shikamaru so ROCKS~!

I love it!
Shikamaru enters!
and I love that the girls are going crazy for him!
XD

Scary and a awsome.
I love that Neji cares about Hinata!
And your making me feel bad for Sasuke...dang it!
but oh well Love your story!
=)

It sounds so good I love it!
and poor Hina =(

i really have to say i love your story.. and am hating that you disconnected it.. TT TT

i really like your story plot and want to kno what happens next!! ((:

crazy good story

this story seems very interesting

cant wait to read more of it

I am so intregued with the plot and the story in general! I like the way you wrote the charaters, because that's kinda how Neji and Sasuke would be if they were the way Kishimoto made them to be in real life!

Anyway! I love this story with a passion, can't wait till chapter 6!

great story!
plz update again soon!

This is such an interesting story, so many possibilites come to mind about her mother's murder. Hope this wasn't the last chapter since it is so good.

You really can't let it end like this can you?? It's just so...I want to read more of this fantastic story! I have to read more PLEASE! By the way I love it I really do, one of the best stories I've read yet and it would be a shame for it to end like this! Please you must continue! Please!

Must say I love the first chapter and can't wait to read the next one, I know it says discontnued (I think I spelt that wrong) but I really hope you continue with it because it seems like an awesome story, can't wait to read the next chapter.