that was cute...i like seeing kakashi a we bit possessive...shows that he really does care..but he should know better..this is iruka after all...lol...

awe so sweet

I didn't think it was weird at all. I really liked the begining when Iruka was trying to figure out what to call Pakkun. ~.~

oh. that was good. Had some serious undercurrents in it. Kakashi is fun to write possessive. That, and it's true that he could make for a frighteningly possessive boyfriend. I liked your short little weird fic! Good job!
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Meg

It's not weird. Poor Kakashi, his life really hasn't been easy, has it? At least we know Iruka won't be cheating on him. He's Iruka, haha. And it's so much proof, in an odd way, that Kakashi REALLY cares. :) Cute, nicely written.

Wow, it was all just fun and mildly disturbing games until the last line. And then it got GOOD> I like the idea of a controlling, jealous Kakashi. I like the implied threat that the word "mistakes" invokes. It's refreshing to see Kakashi as a man deeply flawed here, without actually seeing the flaws in direct light. Nice work. You've made me think.

Cute. A jealous Kakashi.

I love the idea of a jealous Kakashi, but the only thing I didn't like about it was the "mistakes" comment at the very end. It just seems to cross the line into the "bad" sort of possessive. But yes, Pakkun is always awesome. :)

Aww...

heh! mistakes, huh?

hm

That was an interesting and unique spin on Kakashi/Iruka.


cdk

Short, cute, but good. :)

For curiosity sake what would happen if Iruka was raped or something, would Pakkun smell it on him and think he was cheating then tell Kakashi would become very angry and dump Iruka. Or would he listen... just a question...

e-mail with an answer if you want other wise feel free to ignore. Love all your fanfictions, especially...The mission and Incarcerated...*smiles*

Wow, talk about trust in a relationship! Kakashi's a jealous bastard and I love it! ^^

That was very sweet. Kakashi being afraid that Iruka might cheat on him. Stupid Jounin...
Best was though what Pakkun thought about the whole situation. I absolutely adore him (as you know) and there are much too few stories with him.
Nayru