Beautiful man... just beautiful. struck me down to the heart.

Oh...oh. That was so heartfelt. If the order of the dragon Riders didn't really exist (dragon hatching for The One, The One naming it), the would truly make a great excerpt in the book.
I love how you managed to describe the feelings of a mother to her (unborn) child, and the idea is just fabulous.

that makes no sence but yet makes all the sence in the world. It was beautiful.

Fuck you. I feel horrible now.
Its amazing and thats why it makes me so pissed off.
Keep up the awesome work but... can you try something that doesnt hurt this damn much?

this is a beautiful piece of artwork. i mean half way though my breath just got caught in my throat. i could breathe. the story held me under until i read that last line. just beautiful.

I love your poem!! I am going to have to check out your story, too!!

yep! I love it! I really like how you made everything fit so perfectly!

this is so cute, the bond between mother and daughter is strong

Aw thats so sad =*( poor Vervada

WHA! WHERE DID YOU COME UP WITH THIS? Oh wait, I read it in your other story *slaps forhead* duh!
Great

AW thats so sad :'( i wanna comfort mama dragon!