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| Pedroia the Destroya 2008-04-02 ch 15,  | abuseI like it! Really Passinate. |
| Isanoot 2007-10-07 ch 15, | abusewonderful |
| VegasButterfly 2007-08-28 ch 15, | abusei love so sweet :) |
| .Rengin. 2007-08-17 ch 15, | abuseI think im a little late to write this review... But i loved your story! |
| JennCorinthos 2007-07-20 ch 15, | abuseAMAZING! Absolutely AMAZING! JENNIFER |
| probysgirl 2007-06-22 ch 15, | abuseAw! this story was so cute! it made me cry (thats a good thing btw!) brilliant! |
| ReJo 2007-06-03 ch 7, | abuseMORE GREAT LINES: "Hey, tough guys. You know what assaulting an officer means? You familiar with that term? No? Well, let me enlighten you. It means I’m dragging your asses back to the station with me and sticking you in a cell with Butch. Butch is a lonely guy. He’d really enjoy the company of some nice Italian boys like yourself. He’d love you long time." In her sleep-deprived mind earlier that morning, it had made total sense, but now in the reality of the moment, she was starting to second-guess herself. |
| ReJo 2007-06-03 ch 6, | abuseGREAT LINES: “I have got to say,” Flack said, slapping the table with his hand, “I never thought I would live to see this day. Danny Messer, the player extraordinaire, without any game.” "But that’s the old Danny. I’m not sure what this second-hand, bootleg version of the man I know is thinking.” “You know Flack, every now and then I think you might actually know what you’re talking about.” |
| DistractedlyHere 2007-05-07 ch 15, | abuseVery nice chapter! Amazingly true to life and characters. Well done. Sweet, tense, hot, etc etc. Great work. |
| stine111 2007-05-07 ch 15, | abuseThat was some AMAZING story! I don't even know what to comment, there are so many great things in it. I love the tension (GREAT title) between them in the beginning before they let their feelings be known. The last chapter was also superb, loved the written correspondance between them and of course the ending ;) Would love to read more from you - will immidiately look for other stories ;) Stine. |
| LocoGreggo 2007-05-05 ch 15, | abuseAwesome ending. *applauds* Greatness. Well done. |
| Devilla 2007-05-03 ch 15, | abuseHave been missing this story, this was the BEST chpt.. great how you got them back by the notes, flirting ect.. then they just knew it.. I will so miss this story... you a great writer... very creative story... |
| claudibelle 2007-05-02 ch 15, | abuseYeah, you're back! I've missed this story. |
| chili-peppers 2007-05-02 ch 15, | abuseWow! Amazing update!! I loved it so sweet!I loved all the little notes and e-mails. Brilliant job! |
| Amerie 2007-05-02 ch 15, | abusei loved it! |