absolutely beautiful. starcrossed lovers.

Poor Jackson...:(

I feel sad...

I'm surprised I haven't come across this before. I swear I saw your sn somewhere but I guess I didn't. Hmm. I'm quite excited to start your Bejerot trilogy dispite being a miserable state right now.

Anyway, the point is, this was fantastic. And if this was just a taste of how wonderful your trilogy is then I'm all for it.

So. **. Raw. I LOVED IT.

I love this! You have a wonderful style of writing. It's very poetic. I'm a fan, nice.

Wow, that was...wow. Really awesome! I'm adding this to my favs list. I especially loved the second half of the fic. And the last few sentences. lol

Anyway, it was awesome! :)

~kassie

Nice.

this was so good. ive read the original story and loved it (i mean, that happens to everyone at some point and its sad and yet not and just so good)and i love this one too. good job!

Bravo bravo!
that was a great one shot. For some reason it kept me at the edge of my seat. I liked the second to the last line. However I'm not entirely sure what to make of the closing line...
:)
Still, great job. :)

:sighs: It IS a sad story... :sniffles:

I like your writing!

Nic.

Beautifully written!