Wow! I like it.

1. Do you think Chazz brothers are a hero? Hmm... I think so.

2. Jagger genius? Wow, I wonder how genius he is.

3. So cool! I want my brain like calculator also.

4. His score is A? Wow, I can't believe it.

5. Slade popular? I wonder how fun it will be...

6. They're not Chazz heroes again? Is it when his brothers disowned him as a little brother?

7. Well, so far, it's so good one-shot, even it OOC.

Take Care! Haibara Kawaii.

i loved it

I really liked this story. I can imagine Chazz's past being soemthing like this and how he's changed since back then. Great work

... Dont that wrong "..." is good, seeing what kind of story this is. I love it. Thanks for doing a fanfic about Chazz's past. Most people wouldn't understand why he was such a snob (Although the ones that DO understand have different versions.) perhaps if people read this, they wouldnt hate chazz anymore.

That's so sad! But a very good story.

Hahaha...That's the Chazz we all know and love!

How dare you say that waas out of character, woman?

It was beauifully written and soo true...The real Chazz would be proud!

Wow I really liked it!

bravo! bravo! i loved it!

Well it's chazz's personal thoughts, so who cares if he's out of character. It was still really good.

I really don't think Chazz was OCC. I mean I can actually see this happening in his life.

Poor Chazzy ;.; His brothers are such meenies.

Battle-Girl

Oh my God, that was probably the best thing I have ever read. I am a huge fan of depressing stuff like this. And I don't think Chazz was out of character. I know he's supposed to be all tough and never get sad, but that story really explains why he's like that. I mean, no one would be that way for fun, there is always a reason behind it. By the way, don't you think that story goes well with "Numb" by Linkin Park? Because I do, it fits perfectly.

God! Explains a lot, I like it a lot... (Sniff) I just wanna hold Chazz close and tell him it's all okay now! (sobs, only partically faked)

Wow...That's all i can really say.This is one of the most interesting things i had ever read.No joke.And it was really sad.You did really great on this.Good job!-

I didn't think that this was out of character, I enjoyed reading this very much. This story sucessfully toyed with my emotions from heartwarming beginning to a depressing end. This was one of the better fanfics that I've read on the YGO GX fandom. Thanks for making my day and good luck on your future stories!

Oh, I love this story! The whole idea of Chazz feelings himself change over the years to become like his brothers is beautiful! Plus I like the idea of Chazz having asthma and being bad at math- I dunno, it just feels right somehow.

Keep writing!

Rose

cool story (sorry for teh short review, my brain is mush (again) lol)