Poor guy. *giggles* I bet he's going to feel pain for a while. I'm really glad that Miles3 told me about this, I love it.:)

Poor Tim. lol Great job on this story! :)

Very teenager. I'm impressed.

another good one.. already read this one be4.. just thought i'd leave a review this time around. later.

I like it, it's cool

POOR KID!

Hmmmm... do I sense a bit of scarcasm? You do make me giggle, Miss Priss... (I know you just love me calling you that. Hehehe) I do enjoy your writings, humor, and your self-expression in general. :)

LOL! And I thought nothing could top the original! This is hilarious - the commissioner scene was priceless. Keep up the fantastic work. :)

That was even better! Oh more, please more!

Fire

Poor, Tim! Awe...! I love it :)

you are crazy you do know that right? :)

I love the story can't wait for the next part. I just feel so sorry for Tim. He just can't seem to get a break.

Well I wasn't expecting a sequel, but it was GREAT! Poor Tim! hehehehe I'll venture a guess to say there will be another wonderful sequel to this...right? ;)