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| xkiisstheraiin 2008-01-15 ch 2, | abusethis is so cute!! =) |
| tiana3826 2007-12-24 ch 8, | abusethat was an awesome story! |
| Chelles 2007-08-18 ch 8, | abuseThat was such a sweet ending! I have to admit that I was sad when I read that this was the last chapter, but you definitely took this story to its end beautifully. I love that Grissom only knew of "Shrek" because the lab techs quoted it, and that he took Lindsey to the movies. But, I have to say, I adored the scene of him getting ready to share his bed with Sara. The nervousness was just perfect. I have loved every single chapter of this story, and this final one definitely did not disappoint. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. |
| BrookeGreene 2007-08-09 ch 8, | abusewow that was so good. I just completely forgot like where I was and what I was doing. It was actually a little creepy when it ended and I realised that I'd been reading a fan fic. I can't really explain it properly, just, that was really REALLY good. |
| jtbwriter 2007-08-09 ch 8, | abuseThat was sweet-thanks for a cute story-one that is very believable ...the mental pic of Sara being a cover hog alone is priceless! Good work! |
| LouAnn 2007-08-09 ch 8, | abuseThis is such a great story. I really enjoyed it. Good job. |
| VegasButterfly 2007-08-09 ch 8, | abusei love this story it is funny and just great i love the chap were warrick said he understood why sara started going back to the gyn and gil decide that he was on decomp duty for the next month :) |
| Angela Kinetic 2007-08-09 ch 8, | abuseA great end to an even better story. Thank you for staying in character throughout it, this makes me happy. Good luck with school. Off hand note, you have to check out Aftermath Inc and The C.S.I. Effect when you have a bit of time to read. They are both really intellegent and personally Aftermath made me laugh. Just thought I'd share that tid-bit. ^^ |
| Haldir's Heart and Soul 2007-08-09 ch 8, | abuseI love Finding Nemo and The Incredibles!Especially Nemo because I cried in that movie.It showed how a father never gave up against all odds in order to find his missing son.Besides,I saw a lot of adults watching it so I was impressed. |
| Emeric Switch 2007-08-09 ch 8, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this fic. It was a fun idea that fit in with the TV storyline perfectly. It's always great to read about Grissom and Sara and you have brought their characters out so well. Thank you for writing it! |
| amisha.pineapple 2007-08-09 ch 8, | abuseAw. So adorable. I love this fic. I'm sad to see it end. I really hope you get some time to keep writing. |
| ckofshadows 2007-08-09 ch 8, | abuse“Gil,” she said with a sweet exasperation, crossing her arms over her chest. “Catherine told everyone about the time you took Lindsey to see A Bug’s Life.” He shrugged. “I don’t know what you’re talking about; nothing happened.” “You almost got kicked out of the theatre because you kept going off, rather loudly, about all the factual errors!” He managed a polite snort before stuttering a few times. Finally he managed, “I’ll admit that maybe I shouldn’t have said…things loud enough to where it disturbed other people.” Grissom paused. “But it was obvious the writers hadn’t done any research! The film was teaching children the wrong information on insects. The beetles--” Thief! Thief! You took that from my Wherefore! (I kid) That was a cute chapter, love the part about sharing a bed. :) |
| felena1971 2007-08-08 ch 7, | abuseI'm at a loss...this is a wonderful story! Thank you so much for sharing your special talent with the world. And I love how she finally told him how she felt; I can't imagine a more perfect setting to tell him. |
| Angela Kinetic 2007-07-17 ch 7, | abuseFirst off: congradulations on getting into grad school and best of luck with your studies! I'm just going into college myself, what are you studying, if you don't mind me asking? Secondly I absolutly love this story and can't wait to see more of it, this is seriously one of the best stories I've read so far, it wasn't too over the top or out of character. Amazing job. Now that it's almost 1 AM in my lovely little corner of the world I am going to bed. |
| GeekGirl18 2007-07-14 ch 7, | abuseOMG hun your writings adorable you've made my week lol Lindsay |