lol...:D :P
hahahahahahaha...

Haha that was funny. I'm not a huge fan of song fics but I liked how Sirius was just being Sirius as always.

I honestly don't really like this story, but it was okay. I would have liked it better if you had slightly altered the words of the song to apply a little more to James and Lily. I'm not trying to be mean though.

(The last part does make the characters seem a bit gay...)(That's not a bad thing, just a little random.)

that "I like your song" bit made Sirius and Remus sound a bit gay...

Awesome story!!

VERY COOL

WHERE DID U COME UP WITH THE POEMS.

HOPE U KNOW WHO I AM

cool fanfic i mean songfic or watever.hey i never knew u could write so well
its really cool.
awsome


dont drop ur pen at all,
and dont let it fall.

OK i know its dumb do not curse me for it.
so anyway its really really cool


luv
DEAD KILLER

cool one, hr...write more

ahem...vetti story...!!

I LIKED IT A LOT.IT WAS REALLY GOOD.YOU SHOULD RITE ANOTHER SONGFIC.

heyy!!
THAT WAS TO COOL!
I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE U!

i like the
"Sirius?"
"yes?"
"I like your song"
and when remus tells sirius he doesnt know his letters

I loved the story. I loved Arvil Lavigne's song the Skater Boy. Your story was a real treat for me.;) Rock on!

Hilarious! And so so sweet :)
I love how it took them seven years to write the song (grins)
Great job
-Acelinn

I LOVE THAT SONG! I LOVE THAT STORY! It was awesome!