wow very well writen, very intresting. i cant wait to read more. hope you update soon

hey! great fanfic!! lol please write more, or i wont be able to sleep XD I absolutely love it :P great job.

oh wow that was um wow. i get a bdsm vibe from you haha jk jk

This is the one! You say you have two more chapters, please post them up daddy?

Hi
Hey I wanted to know if you're going to continue with this story, because well I would really wanted to know what happen next.
But well is your decision. But honestly I like what you done.

*gasp* OMG! This was such a... (if i say turn on would it make me sound sick and masochistic?) really good chapter.
T_T poor Natsuki-chan... Hmm... (can't get the images of hawt Tomoe/Shizuru smex/spanken' outta my head)... yeah... I'll be... (Tomoe/Shizuru... *licks lips*)... I definetly will be waiting for next chapter.

Can't... make... Bbzk... stop... jumping >/

ahh.. finally a new chapter.. and natsuki's in it.. a bit.. well anywayss update soon!:D

so please give us the 2 chapters. *puppy eyes*

Ah! Cliffhanger!

But very good with suspense. I'm beginning to dislike Ms Maria.

The thought of shizuru receiving a "spankin'" by Tomoe(in my opinion...) is sorta sexy... mew...
And i agree, many of us neglect Tomoe and just... dislike her overall... (I am included... But I've only watched 13 eps of Otome... so I guess it's *kinda* understandable)... but now that I think about it *a little too much* She just wants to be loved... like Shizuru-san did in Mai-HiME (and god forbid, I enjoy the thought of her forcing herself in/on Natsuki) Ehem, Anywho... I'll be waiting for the next update.

geh... tomoe.. eventually this'll follow that one episode with tomoe.. i hope natsui gets into this fic soon so she can beat the crap out of tomoe.. unlike the anime.. T_T. update soon!

this is really good! please please please update soon

This was...eloquent and powerful. Had my heart in my throat the whole time ever since Tomoe stepped into the cell.

I know that Shizuru would do anything to protect Natsuki but it sort of makes me mad that Natsuki can be so clueless about it and just offer her a 'I'm sorry for all the trouble I caused' apology at the end of the series.

I love this because the concept is daring and dramatic with a down-to-earth gritty feel about it.

I LOVED THIS NYO! I want to hear more nyo >