LOVE IT, BRAVA.

Delightful and lovely chapter.

I was looking for some good Fran/Baltheir and yours was just what I needed. I think that you set the situation up nicely. Also, you got both of their voices just right. Great Job!

I loved this, it was great! I'm such a huge fan of Balfran fics, and they're quite difficult to write for sometimes, so it's even nicer when I find someone who writes them so well. Sweet and cute without being sickly. Very well done!

Words cannot possibly express how much I love this.

I love it, although to me you make it seem that Fran was more submissive that she really is. I would of imagined that it would be Balthier depending on Fran; but oh well xD!

Aw!! The ending was so cute! This is a great fic! It was kinda funny about "the man who walked the Golmore for three hours poisioned, who didn't ask for an antidote." Keep writing fics!

Happy Writing,

Crys

I loved this, they were both really well IC and the the after-effects of the drugs were a nice touch.

You have such a way with words! I loved this piece! :DD

Although, PERSONALLY I think when one has a partner then they're both equals. You made Fran sound . . . weaker somehow, by being a step behind Balthier. Like, she depends on him. But they're partners so they depend on each other. Other than that, great job!

Keep up the awesome writing!

Aw. This is such a cute portrayal of their relationship. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
^_^

Very pretty and nicely written. :)

Aw...this was such a cute story. It deserves more reviews! Hehe, I really enjoyed it! I like how they're very in character. Love this coupling, and I hope you write more BalthierXFran stories! You're writing skills are awesome. =]

I love this fic, it's fluffy yet not out of character :D You have a way with the Balthier humour in this story haha Great Job~ I hope to read more!

Wonderful. I've read some crack in this fandom, but this certainly isn't it. I love your writing style - so flowing and sensual. Very nice to read for someone like me (I have grapheme personification synaesthesia).

Hm hm. Your story has made me one happy Balthier/Fran enthusiast. I especially loved how you mentioned that much of their relationship is unspoken, that it doesn't NEED to be spoken. Very, very accurate. On top of that, the words you used to describe it were well chosen.
Little niggle though: you kind of stuck Fran in a secondary spot at the end. Instead of sounding like Fran supporting him with her being a step behind, it sounded like she was following, which is kind of strange to me. I just don't see Balthier/Fran that way, you know? Then again, it could just be me.
Sweet ficlet, Icor. I hope to see more from you!

- Sakura