I loved this: simple, no giant plot of new original bad guys playing it Koyla style, but so much effective!
I loved the whump, I must say :P

This was a great story! I absolutely loved it! Keep up the good work:)

Oh, ouch! Poor John :( I've nearly giving myself a concussion showering, but that that on a ship, and the waves deiced to hit the boat and throw me out! Great fic!

Cute story. :)

Oh! This is so good! I'm so glad that I discovered this! It was funny, whumpy and had some lovely Shep scenes all there at the same time! I love your writing style and all your lovely descriptions! Fab story! Uh oh! Got to go, someone's calling me! Gotta go!

Oh, poor Shep! Self whump truly is the meanest... and I bet Rodney's going to give him a really hard time later.

that was great! :-D

Aw, that was cute.

Hee hee! Risk assessment... It's true though, isn't it? Well done, Great fic!

totally enjoyable.

A lovely little whump piece! Thanks for the giggles. :D

Great story! Poor John!! But Rodney's right...John really is the only person who could injury themselves by getting out of the shower!!

I really like this. One thing I noticed was you seemed to jump between point of views, i.e. you're speaking from John's view and the next sentence you switch you Carson and then back to John. A good beta would really help you with your continuity.

Funny and nicely written...no brave "saving the world" and getting slammed Sheppard, but just a poor regular guy having a bad, bad day...nice to have McKay at his sympathetic best...or worst...and wonderful Carson being, well, wonderful Carson. Liked this very much. Thanks.

Tee hee...That was great! Poor Sheppard will never hear the end of it with Rodney. You did a really great job once again with the characterization. You so have Rodney down. Looking forward to more. Hint hint. :-)