Oh yes! Haruka put Naru in a proper place! That was amazing, my fellow! And I enjoyed the post-traumatic stress explanation. Keep up the good work.

Interesting indeed. I was rather hoping that Keitarou would drop into some sort of primal survival mode and charge Naru, but I guess Kanako is able to ensure that Naru gets what she deserves. Could make for quite the story if the girls actually have to be CAREFUL around Keitarou for a change. I'm rooting for a Kana x Kei pairing. Keep writing!

Nit-pick unrelated to the story itself. No fighting has ever occurred between "Croation" and "Serbian" nationalists. Plenty of fighting has occurred between CATHOLIC and ORTHODOX churchgoers. Don't let the religions of the world wash their hands of their crimes by hiding behind euphemisms.

Political correctness aside, I do applaud your attempt to work real-world conflict into a fanfiction. If I'm not mistaken, your Keitarou enlisted (or was he conscripted?) at the age of 10? You've got guts, not to shy away from issues such as military use of children. I'm curious to see what comes of this piece of work.

Well, well, soldier...

Post-traumatic stress! HOW didn't I think of that?! Damn!
Now, Helluva job, son! Well, I WAS hopin' GI Kei to take on Naru and PWN! her when she attacked. XD But Kana-chan's slap AND Haruka's chewing her head up was good enough. Hoo-rrah!

Now, I can see Mutsu-chan won't be doin' anythin' in this fic...(Sigh) Well, Kana-chan's good enough for'im in here. Good work, soldier.

Let's see what'cha got next. Update ASAP, that's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Wow, this story is deep...

The grammar is top notch too...

So yeah, I hope you plan on updating this story often. I believe this is an original concept, so keep at it^_^

This sounds like it will be a very good fanfic. Please continue the story and update soon.

WHY THE HECK DID MY AUTHOR ALERT NOT EMAIL ME WHEN THIS WAS UPLOADED?!

This looks excellent. Absolutely glorious. Child soldier Keitaro, veteran of a Yugoslavian breakup-esque war? WANT.

This is a great start to the whole fic and it has an excellent premise to it particuarly with the inspiration being the wars in what used to be Yugoslavia. Looking forward to whatever pairing may occur and also how the girls would relate to this Keitaro.

Be interesting to see how he would respond to Naru and Motoko's attitudes towards him which I imagine will happen.

Oho! Here's a new plot. Looks to be rather interesting indeed.

I'll be following it. ^^

-Da Plague

Very nicely done, It's good to see you (one of the best Lh-writers of the moment) and Grey Wolf (He has very good LH-Ideas) working together.
I remember talking to Grey Wolf about this idea and with the apparent Kei/Kan, it's becoming even better, I just hope you can keep the bashing down to what the story needs and not overdo it.

Ps. There was a war in Middle America too that started with a soccermatch but can't remember which to countries

Good story.

A SoldierKeitaro! story where he hasn't lost his nice-guy personna. I want to see more before leaving a more detailed review so please continue it is good so far.

Nice story; I'm reading this more for the KeitaroKanako romance I'm assuming it'll contain rather than the war aspect of it so I hope you don't put too much of a focus on the latter. In any case, good luck on the next chapter I'm looking forward to seeing this story progress.

This was awesome, although I never really liked AU so much, this one kept getting better and better the lower I scrolled. Keep Up The Good Work an dpuh-leze! Post...again...soon...

This sounds just like a man u/england game gone bad (happens far to often), anyhow nice start, please keep it up