...the ending made me go 'aww'!

XD

Haha!

Hmm... it does seem the most, hmm? Ideal situation? Given Tenten's logic and well... Neji's downright possessiveness there wouldn't be any more room for Ryo-san.

But that's just me.

The battle scene was awesome! And the way Sasuke attempted to destroy her by destroying everything she had was heart-wrenching, in a way.

"Then I will destroy your mind."

The progress was just... bloody and gory, just the way it's supposed to be. XP

I explain things horribly. Bleh.

This is an AMAZING story! I enjoyed it so much! Please write more! =D

Like the start. Nice setup.

So just a bit confused at the end. 5 elite shinobi? Neji, Lee, Naruto, Shikamaru...I counted 4 unless Sakura lives there too. Even if this references another shinobi living there to show up in later chapters, Tenten seems unaware of who all the occupants are. (3rd point observer) So I find it a bit confusing.

Other than that, enjoyed this chapter. -Runs off to read the rest-

I EFFIN LOVED IT! i wish there was more though :(

I liked it. I think Tenten's and Neji's baby would look SO adorable!

The details and dialogue are so perfect!! And the verbs and adjectives, etc etc!!
i love it!

:]] what a sweet story!!

loved it; keep writing your amazing fanfics!

beautiful story!
utterly wonderous :D
spectacular job

this story was good . I enjoyed reading it

This is a beautiful ending and a great story i really loved it and... *sniffles* NO I CRYING! WAH!

oh gosh. i really love ur writing. they are really really really fun to read and i really enjoy them. this plot is original and the talent that it has is astounding. i cant wait to read more!

wow. its a really great and touching story (i almost cried at the part when they visited gai-sensei's grave) and i enjoyed it very much. the ending was very good too! this is probably the best nejixten fanfic i have read so far; keep up the good work ;D

It was nothing like I had ever expected and everything I really needed.
I'm very glad that you did not make Neji and Tenten's relationship all cliche and fall-in-love-at-first-sight and happyhappy joyjoy. Because not all relationships are as carefree like that and this is solid proof.

I love the raw and human emotions in this. I was shocked at the abortion and marraige refusals in the last chapter, though I guess that was part of the insecurities.

There are not enough words to decribe all the feelings I have, but know this: it may seem like crap to you, but to me it's like a work of art. At times it made me roll over on the ground laughing, and at times it made me have one of those bawling, stuffy-nosed, puffy-eyed crying sessions.

Sorry about the long-ass sappy comment, but I just felt like I needed to say that =)
-chiachia105-