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| Pink Illusion 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is so cool. I really like it... it's so nicely done. |
| f u r o g u 2007-04-11 ch 1, | abuse2nd pov. some lines for me are repeated ones in a way, and they made me become more concentrated into the story. good. |
| xsynthetic-smile 2007-03-11 ch 1, | abusebeautiful piece throughout; some namine cliches, but always quickly overruled by tender, heartfelt sentiments that suit the character perfectly. amazing song choice. exquisite prose. simple, yet touching. incredible job. winners will be announced tonight. |
| vintaqee 2007-03-02 ch 1, | abuseaw. this is a nice fict. with slight namiora, too. n,n namine seems scary here. xDD; dont ask me why. *weird* and the ending is uhm, nice, michelle. so keep writing. i get distracted so easily.. so see you later! x) ` MCHLV; < 3 felia. |
| Arcon 2007-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. That was so sad yet at the same time so good. Very impressive. |