amen to the ichiruki withdrawals! ugh. seriously, all bleach has to offer lately is a lot of shunpo-ing, blood, and shouting.. sheesh. more ichiruki, mangaka-san! ;p

awesomeness...

'Yes, master.' ahaha that is great!

oh *high five*
I is a major IchiRuki fangirl as well! Great chapter!

Ugh your Genius-ness kills me! It's so fluffy (and I absolutely ADORE fluff) and cute ;D

Go Karin! xD

yes, this IS one of the craziest IchiRuki stories I've ever read...but it's one of the best, heck I think it ties in first place with this other one that I read a LONG time ago.

Amazing, simply amazing.

xD Did I ever mention that you are a genius?! No? Shame on me :O
Well, you are! And poor Byakun, i feel bad for him!

you are a really great writer, I loved ur chapters. great job.

hahaha nice ^_^

ah so good ^_^

story is so cute!

hehe cute. Ichigo is really good with little kids, especially girls. he's personified great here, Rukia too with her "systematically dismember you" line.

beautifully written! what i love about IchiRuki is the depth of their relationship, the undertones of affection (be it cannon or not), and the will they/won't they...and i think this first chapter sums it up greatly.

win.

Haha I know the feeling about the fighting dragging on.. and on. This might sound weird but my friends introduced me to the wonderful world of bleach just a few months ago... is the series still going on? I hope so. Anyway, great job!

>>Being a shinigami was about remaining dead inside.

I loved that line! You're right, it's true. And never think that your words are wasted: Even if everyone else has a problem with your writing (which is very, very far from the truth) you are just helping yourself by practicing. I'm just glad you are nice enough to share your works with us!