very good. that was a good way to put the way mana and mahaado met.

This was a really well written and original take on how Mana and Mahaado met. The fact that it's accomplished almost entirely via dialogue is even more impressive, since I personally have difficulties with writing conversations. Very well done.

That´s so cute! Hope you write a second part, it was short, but very sweet!

[squeele] Mana and Mahodo are such a cute together! So cute story!

that was very well written.I loved it.and i loved the other one Playing Father.those 2 were very well written.good job!