I like it, it's fun, sad and cute at the same time ^^
And I really like the way Naruto is (even though it isn't so much different from the original one since he's still very thick... xD ) and I like "chibi-Sasuke" too, he seems so sweet ^^ (sorry, can't remember how you spell his name XD )
Please update soon ^^

You MUST wright another chapter! You are amazing at this, not many stories can bring me to tears or any emotion besides happiness. You made me sad, happy, feel as hurt as Sakura, want to beat Sasuke to a pulp, and scream my lungs out. Dude, write more! PLEASE! You absolutely ROCK at this! I love reading your fanfic! You write like you get into the story, which is amazing since not many people do anymore (at least, for the books I find hehe), and that makes your story seem all the better. The emotion you put into it, the drama, the action, and their lines! It really seems like I'm watching the show only with just the words. Your amazing at this, please please please write another chapter! I must know what you have planned!


By the way... did I mention how much I love your fanfic? If not, I really REALLY REALY love it! YOUR AWSOME! THANKS FOR WRITING THIS, IT RULES! (just like you for creating it!)

I just have to say that I absolutely love this fanfic. While there are a few spelling and grammar errors I highly enjoy the plot line. Though I do greatly wish that it were a finished piece so your readers would know how it ends, or perhaps it end to let them use their imagination, I absolutely enjoyed reading up to this point.

*twitch* SO MUCH EMOTION! XD My story rating is if you either feel bad for the characters its good,if you wince and feel the chills of the part of your body that the character in the story got painfully hurt thats a plus.

If you start getting horny/feeling like whats happening from lemon fiction,thats great,and if you start to cry and emotionally connect with the characters in such a way,thats like A++ or 106% right there.


Is Sai in this though? Im curious,the artist ninja hasnt been mentioned at all in this forfilled with great awesomeness of awesomeness fanfiction at all. Sorry if this review is pointless at all,but i really like the story. Its A-M-A-Z-I-N-G like cookies.. Hehe..

SO FRIGIN AWESOME. Just a question:Does this take place after sai appears in the story or.. Yea.

Great story!! Please continue, I would really like to know what happens next!

well update soon plz i gotta know if sasuke loves sakura or not after everything that happened and also that sakura still loves sasuke ur doing a great job

OMFG thats so freakin awesome oh please continue please kk
oh im off 2 read the reast of your sasusaku fanfictionz ^^
oh and its me from DA MIA-1414

Please update soon! ><
I REALLY REALLY REALLY want to know what happens next!
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aww, poor Sakura! i hope sasuke and her make up!

Hey Author,
I think once more. This story had remind me of another ture story of my family. But ends a very sad ending.
You see. My sister liked - no - actually she LOVED him, like so much. But he, you know rejected... But secretly, he loved her too. But it was too late. She moved away. FOREVER... My brothers from his grade said everytime, they'd come over his house. His room looked all like wow, you know. He would have breakdowns and everything. Then everything was all happy again, my sister came back, but she stilled loved that boy who broked her heart. He couldn't take it no more he said "This is my chance, I have to tell her before its to late again". So he did tell her and they lived peacefuly. A happy ending right...
WRONG! That bastard, he cheated on my sister, I wanted to kill him for that, she kept crying herself to sleep. Telling herself "Was I not good enough for you, I think I have to move on but I love you, but if he's happy, I guess I should be happy right?" I hated when she said that. He was everything to her. Now he just broke her heart like that DAMN THAT * Here is how it started. My sister she moved away again, but came back to live with me and my family for good so she could see THAT BASTARD... Well then, she went to visit him, and all, today was his birthday, she had gotton him a golden bracelet, very beautiful also manly, it was in a box so she decided to write something in it, it said, "I'm sorry, I couldn't see you for a while but I'm we're back together" all of those happy birthday stuff and stuff. I and my other brothers came and the door was unlocked.
We came inside, you know, we heard, grunting sounds and moans and groans, it came from, inside my sister's boyfriend room. I opened it. It was not a pretty picture.
It was my sister's boyfriend on top of a girl naked. Making love to each other kissing. My sister's boyfriend finally noticed us because of my sister's sobs. I was still too shocked but snapped out of the trance and dropped the cake. My sister ran and her boyfriend got up and ranned after her, my brother's and me blocked his path and beat the crap out of that CHEATED LYING BASTARD boyfriend now ex-boyfriend i hope of my sister. Also his naked friend on his bed. After, we except me I kept an eye on him but kept hidden. He cleaned up the cake I dropped he kicked out that naked 'friend' out of his house. He founf the box that my sister dropped. He saw the beautiful brcaelet and the note. Later that night, he cried himself to sleep. While he was sleeping in the afternoon, I called over his friends, told them what happened, and they went in there. And stuff happened.
I went after my sister. And saw her dead yes sucide

CAUGHT!
Hahaha. Bastard!

cool chapter

cool chapter

Nice chapter although a bit sad that Sakura is that hurt ~_~

OMG OMG OMG! Are you ever going to post another chapter? PLEASE it's killing me! I have to know what happens! So good- but why can't they just be together already, DAMNIT! He needs to just go over to her, and kissy- kissy they make up and live HAPPILY EVER AFTER! YAY! pwetty pwez? *.*