lovelove it so far!

I think that there needs to be more updates to this story.

I get the feeling you aren't going to be updating anymore?

If you're still out there, please remember to write another chapter for this one. I really love this story, I doubled up laughing and I really hope you'll continue it. It's been 4 years and 6 days since your last update (yeah I just scrolled to the top of the page in order to check the date), so if you have time ... it would be great to hear from you again. :) I'll put you on my alert list

fun series of stories. I like the dancing one

this is really funny

Hilarious. I doubled up laughing while reading this chapter. It was so funny that Eric actually believed them. I mean, of course nobody would suspect that there could be vampires at his/her school, but yet... :D

And another great chapter! :-) Loved it.

Wow..great story! I loved your Mike-chapter. The thing with the possum was hilarious :D

Please continue.

I should have reviewed this a long time ago, but i was only able to unearth it just recently, so yeah. You should update this again 'cause it's really, really, really good.

Your reader,
Clawstrike590

Nice!

Ok I just read this story and I like it but Bella's snotty attitude is really ruining it for me.

Bella has been nothing but bitchy to Edward and Alice throughout this story. In the first chapter she is pissed because they swtiched to her gym class, personally i don't see whats so awful about spending more time with your boyfriend and best friend. In the second chapter she acts like a complete brat because Edward helped her score a goal in soccer. I can't believe she ignored Edward and hung out with Mike for the whole day because of that, it was beyond stupid and honestly she reminded me of a 5 year old having a temper tantrum. Then in the next chapter she gets pissed because Edward broke Mike's windsheid, um newflash Bella it was your fault he did. If she hadn't been playing her dumb game Edward wouldn't have done that. Then when Alice tells Bella not to go to La Push because they worry about her, Bella could care less, and she acts like a complete bitch.

Bella seemed to get pissed at every little thing Edward did in this story and it was just not fun to read.

Bella is very OOC is this story which would be fine except that this is suppose to take place in the actual story. If you are writting something that takes place at some point in the book then you should keep the characters the way they are in the book.

I hope that you continue this story but I also hope that you change Bella's attitude.

love it! please keep on writing!

Great story, really enjoyed reading this! Please continue writing!