Absolutely LOVED this story and everything about it. Although it might be a while since the story was completed, it's never too late to send an awesome review.

really great story and chapters!

WOW! You are a wonderful writer. Good to see that Jack and Sam are happy at last. What a love story!

Great story! I love stories that give insight into Jack's past. I'm a big JS fan, so please keep up the superb writing, and I will read it!

Favorite Line: “But you, Jack, you’ve just got the rest of the sky.”

Least Favorite Line: The End.


**sigh** It really is true...all good things do come to an end. **sigh**

Thanks for a wonderfully crafted tale presented with tons of care, talent, vision and emotion. Thanks too for allowing us along for the ride. It was fun and I can't wait for your next work of art.

Favorite Line: “And the past ten minutes realizing that you were right.”

Ah yes. Such a nice thing to hear Jack reach out and admitting he's not always right and it's not always just about his way.

The last 2 Chapters where UNBELIEVABLY AWESOME!
I'm sorry that Jack had His gun unloaded and handed to Sam
in case Irina had wanted to shoot Jack. I'm glad that Sam had
decided that night that She wasn't being fair to Jack and told
Him just She felt. I was worry that Irina shot herself. I'm
glad that Jack and Maria decided that it was best that they
got a divorce. Please Please write another story soon.
THANK YOU!

I had to re-read Ch. 24 to get my bearings with this story, and a good thing I did because it felt new again. Poor Sam worried about Jack. No gun when he faced Irina was reckless behavior, and I'm glad Sam confronted him about it. I liked the way Jack and Maria ended their marriage--non-confrontational. The epilogue was so tender and sweet. We know in your story they will live happily ever after. All in all, this was a very good story--interesting, complex MP case, very unlike anything else I've read. Very well done, jsfan4ever.

Gosh that was WONDERFUL ! I seriously don't know what else to say ! I was stucked to this story from the beginning to the end. Bravo !

Another story ? I can't wait !

And thanks for thanking me, I was like ... "Great !! Thank you !!" lol

YES! I loved it! Another GREAT chapter.

It's so sad to see this story end so soon, but it's for the best--that way you can write another awesome story. :)

Favorite Line: And all Samantha can do is grip her flashlight, hold his gun, and feel her heart beating frantically in her chest.

Awesome how he singles out Samantha to be with him and not let any other members of the assault squad in on his secret. I'm guessing there will be hell to pay for that decision, but I'm also thinking he couldn't care less.

OMG what a cliffhanger! What a way to end this story. Love it. Waiting patiently for the next chapter.

I liked the pace and drama of this, very snappy. Good stuff!

Oh! You've done it again!
I've loved this story from the beginning and I still love it now. Keep on going with it.

Excellent chapter! This is one complicated and very interesting MP case. Even though I want Irina to be caught, I will be sad to see the end of this story. I'm hoping for another J/S personal scene. Very well written, jsfan4ever.