Truly epic

Great story, love the fun touches in this one, particularly the two Bruces--I could tell you had fun writing it. Nice adventure.

Whoo hoo, return of the Bruces! Love those guys!

another wonderful story! I continue to love your humour and action mix, and the plots. Oh boy... Rita just never learns about those jinxes, does she?? Even -I- know that there's no way that they're going to have a nice, smooth journey back to London.

Roddy's little stunt with the gun scared me, btw. Mark of a true author there... I've read your latest one remember.. I knew that he would be ok, and you still had me worried!

Great job! You really monopolize on this category!

gotta love Rita, only she would get all dressed up but keep the boots. i really like this chapter. not really action-y til the last, but still.
woohoo for the Bruces!

Jasper is awesome ^_^ he's a very fun character. and you know, he's useful. that's always a good thing to be.

well...what an intellectual response that was, eh? sometimes i amaze myself.

i'm sorry, i've only just realized i never gave you my reviews...i read most stuff offline on my laptop (no wireless for me) and save my reviews to submit later when i have time...apparently i've lost them. i've read all the Changes of Scene though, and i absolutely love them. i'll write new reviews, i guess, because you deserve lots of feedback. ^_^

Definitely my favorite chapter of the story... Hey, can you write a sequel to this sequel? :) I love this series, its really good. The only thing I think could be improved would be the really abrupt anti-climaxes at the end of both this story and the first "Change of Scene." And I know you're probably getting really tired of me asking this, but would you help staff my c2?

Yay! It's a really great sequel. And the CTS earlier, forget I ever said that. Although I think that there should be a seuel to the sequel. BTW, I have also now started a F.A. c2, so come visit it, post stories there if you think its "worthy". Oh, and do you want to help staff it? Its called Ratropolis. In misc. movies.

Aw, its over? Write another one, please??

Well done! I just finished both of the Change of Scene stories, & enjoyed them quite a bit. I'll certainly be on the lookout for any others you may decide to add to the (dare I say) series?

Again, my congratulations!

This is an amazing story, it's just as good as the first one. continue PLEAS!

Nice! Are you planning on writing any more?

ADVICE: Ignore Flame Rising, s/he is just a cridic who bashes on people because she can't write worth crap (wink) but I think you got what it takes to be a writer. Keep up the good work, ace!

Sorry for the late review. Have to say, I liked how the story turned out. It's nice that you left an entire chapter as an epilogue, a reader's treat. Very creative use of the transmitter in the plot, by the way. Do you have a general idea of your stories before you start? Because the story seems very well thought out. Good mix of genuine action and humor. I liked the line “You can’t be! I absolutely forbid you to die on me now!”. Very Rita-like.

Add me to the list of people clamoring for another flushed away fiction. =]

DO MORE DO MORE! I love your storys! They are nice a long but they are not painfully long like some poeple make it, It flows well and the characters are in character! I love how you put so much detail in the diction. PLEASE do more. And then do more! and then another! Just keep it up! Your very talented and I know you can come up with a lot of new ideas for more pieces. So what are you wanting for. Get starting on Yet ANOTHER another change of scenes!

aw over all ready? Sad, but it was a great story! So romantic! I really hope you make a sequel cause I LOVE YOUR WRITING!