:) Veryy Nicee.
I Likedd The Bit At The EnddWithh Keith x

I loved this story. It was really amazing! Added it to my favorites. Thanks!

How absolutely wonderful. It's definitely going on my favorites list.
Just great.

gosh this whole thing was just utterly fantastic! I read it in a day because I could not take my eyes away from the screen. This was one of the most realistic and satisfactory portrayals of the VM cast I have ever read on fanfiction. Logan wasn't a heartbroken hero all the time, Duncan wasn't stupid or abusive, Dick showed he had a heart without losing all that is Dick, Mac was IN the story, Parker had redeeming qualities by initiating conversation without being annoying, Wallace wasn't a meaningless bit part without personality, Piz wasn't is in too much but that's really not a big loss, and Veronica was part of an ensemble rather than a figure on a pedestal. Also, I loved how Lilly visited other people besides the fab four in their dreams. really great and engaging storytelling. I can't wait to read more of your work!

Fantastic story. Love the way you made each day of their vacation into a chapter, completed with time and date. These added to the development of the story and made it very realistic. You very clevely use the games they played, their banter and Lily to purge each of their own issues. It all progressing very naturally. The best line is in Chapter 10, when Duncan said "I'll always have the memories, and you'll always have her." It sums up the whole LoVe, Duncan triangle.

Your story remind me of a favorite movie of mind, 'The Big Chill'. It's about a group of friends get together for a friend's funeral. Check it out when you got time.

Great story!

Great writing. Impressive plot, true characterisation and you just kept drawing the audience back.

Thanks.

Utterly amazing. Totally brilliant. I've stayed up way past bedtime to finish, and I'm way too tired to go into specifics, but basically I loved the entire thing. Fabulous idea, that I wish I had been the one to come up with, and you completed it perfectly. Never stop writing!
Oh, how I wish I had a fugitive friend that I could bring to a grand cabin in the mountain, where I could have my way with Logan ;-) Ah, sweet dreams!

that was cool so far i really like this story, i think it is an interesting idea though like you pointed out it really isnt camping

that is interesting i don't quite get it though are veronica and piz dating or not

This truly was a brilliant story. Forcing all of these people to confront themselves and each other was what *needed* to happen. And you got all of the characterizations spot-on every time. And that was a hell of an ending. Thanks for such a great story.

ah only keith gosh lol i love VM

This story was phenomenal. I loved each chapter and the realistic way everyone dealt with their grief. And the Veronica/Logan reunion was fantastic. As well as the Mac/Dick undertones. *swoon*

OH man! hahaha...Keith just had to prove that he could outwit Veronica! Loved this story so much!

This is the first time ever that I have written a review for any fanfiction. I have read most of the stories on this site and yours is the best by far. Your writing is extremely crisp, the dialogue is believable and your characterization is spot-on. Thanks for working so hard on it. If you write again, I will read.