That poem was so beautiful and sad!

The last paragraph sounds like a quote from 'The Serpent's Pass' episode, where Ying says "How can we abandon hope? It's all we have!" but I'm not sure.

thats so sweet!!;)

Oh, I liked it! You wrote that poetry, right? It was very good. Admitedly, I know nothing of poetry, but I really enjoyed it and that is what counts! Please write more of these poems- they speak true to the things going on in Avatar right now.

its a cute poem! ^.^

wow, it really touches the heart. Love it! You'd be a great poet someday