thats so swet!

this is good! except maybe you could add some of edward's thoughts when he saw the difference and how she moved??

aw this is so cute :D

Aww. Great story.

That was really good-I always wonder what Edward is thinking when he sees her sleep, and what he's thinking after he left (wow, that made no sense, but what ever). Very good.

aw! i love it!

That was short and sweet, I loved it!