Hope that the laptop gets out of it's evil coma, you gets pass the tests and all that and most importantly: UPDATE SOON! IT'S BEEN WELL OVER A YEAR and I know I'm probably over-reacting but I can't stand it when someone doesn't update when they said they would do it soon. There's only so much patience I have before it snaps.

There were some spelling errors, but I can probably let that slide. Betcha it's either Elyon, Caleb, Vathek (sp?), or maybe...one of the Guardians actually survived and it was an Astral Drop that died in that person's place, who's killed the Marcus dude!

kool update soon

good fanfic more pleases!

i soc an't wait till this is updated it's great.

I love this story! you do SO well at making this believable, that i forgot that it wasn't actually part of the show. :D
please update soon!

An update!
I like the progress you're making in this chapter, it's getting more and more mysterious! I feel that Xian has got something to do with Marcus' murder?
Also, was there any reason for the chapter being underlined? I only ask because it was difficult for me to keep track of where i was.
Can't wait for the next update!

Great update, can't wait to see what happens next.

To bad Will had cancel her trip to Earth, was eager to see what was going to happend (I know that was a while back, but i just rembered that now after giving the story another read through)

YAY! You're updating. REALLY GOOD! xD

great story

You finally update. Hooray! Hope u update faster than you did before and try not to underline your chapter because it's kind of annoying trying to read a story that is underline.

Don't forget to update fast. I need more.

I really hope that your laptop gets fixed soon cause i love the story.

Oh, too bad. I hope you'll be updating soon though. You've had me hooked up!

YAY!
Can Miranda get Pregnant! That would be so cute!

This is a great story, so please update...

that's okay. Just update as soon as u can.