Heh, heh, heh. Very amusing. Three anime series and three manga series summed up in what? Seven pages? Lol.

You know that was a story written in a different sort of view... It was nice.. But It left me hanging on some points..

Is there any yaoi in it?? Is there a Hakkai and Gojyo pairing stuff?.. Do clear this for me will ya?.. Oh and who's the kid Gojyo's been blabbering the story to?

Excellent~ I love Gojyo's take on the tale; it's hilarious. Also, Gojyo telling a kid a story is so cute. You're so good at writing in-character! (:

What a witty, entertaining piece. It's really funny because I could hear Gojyo's voice in my head as I was reading this (inflections and all). I also found that there was a real theatrical element to this one-shot, almost like a monologue. Great work, bravo!

HOLY CRAP! i loved it! *cackles* this sounds like a story gojyo really would tell. and the way he portrayed himself as the hero was hilarious. i hope ya write more like this soon.

That. Was total. Hilarity. OMG! I was laughing SO hard. I love it! You ROCK! Seriously!

Just one question... who's the kid?

PunkWolf

*falls over laughing* That was too amusing. Really, Gojyo's descriptions of everything, and his little side comments to whoever he was talking to. This was really well written, as well, which can be really rare in the humor genre. The idea to write it as one long dialogue was really good, and it works incredibly well this way. Really good job.

~Raven

Eyepatch and Squinty! EYEPATCH and SQUINTY!

*falls to floor laughing hysterically*

(Ten Minutes Later...)

*wipes away tears and crawls back into chair--still giggling*

Whew...that felt god. That's exactly how Gojyo would tell a small, impressionable child all about the journey West. You KNOW even a kid would figure it out, but Gojyo would simply keep on rollin' and pretending that his version was the right one.

*giggle* Eyepatch and Squinty... *snrk*

Okay, I'm done. LOVED IT TO DEATH. You are indeed a literary goddess. I was feelin' kinda out of it 'cause I only got like four hours of sleep, but now I feel good enough to write The Sequel! *bows* Thankee!

May more ideas like this nag you until you give in.
=_= ~*(cyh)*

Ha ha, pretty cute. ^_^

I like how it's open enough to speculate just who's kid Gojyo's talking to, and the man almost-slip-ups of Gojyo.

Very nice read and rather well done stream of consciousness sort of thing. ^^

Ahaha! Sidesplittingly funny. I can see Gojyo doing that, seeing as how he dislikes Sanzo so much. I liked what you did to Hazel, who I personally think is an **. You could have mentioned the puppet-demon that wanted Sanzo's face - Gojyo's reactions were wildly funny in that episode.
As for the kid...very well drawn indeed despite his total absence of dialogue! And his gruff-uncle relationship with Gojyo was brilliant. And I did enjoy the hints of 39 and 85 in there (being me).
"He used to be a priest, too, but they say he went a bit batty. Was way too friendly with his bunny doll, if you ask me. Weirdo." Definitely the best line. I, too, am a NiixBunny fan! Yay for the amazing minority of one!
Ahem. Only a BIT?
Good work!

HAHA!! Fantastic! Seeing as I'm one of the author's working on Greyliliy's tags, I figured I'd come and see what this was about.

So not disappointed. You did an excellent job of getting into Gojyo's head. The story itself was great as well. I applaud it a thousand times over.

You should tell Greyliliy, Redbrunja and Shinigami's Wrath about this. Pick It Up Again is being written by all four of us and I KNOW they'd love to see this as well. If you don't... I will!

*Laughs out loud* That is Gojyo. An amusing re-telling of the story.

~She-Wolf

Hello! I like this a lot. Haha, it was all very...Gojyo. Nicely done. What I like about Saiyuki is that it is easy to write for. It doesn't always have to be slash driven, or even romance, and that's why you're one my favorite writer in the fandom. Lateral Thinking was also really awesome. I put this up with that story. Well, that's it. Just thought I;d pop by. Have a lovely day!

*claps* Bravo! LOVED Gojyo's retelling of the story! ^_^ Hilarious! You got his voice just right! ^_^

And my 58-loving brain adored this:

"Well, our hero and the demon decided that they would make good roommates so they shacked up together somewhere to live out the rest of their days."

Heto! ^^ I finally had the time to read this, and I must say it was enjoyable.

I loved the part where Gojyo started talking about Homura, just because I love those guys. The "Jones for the monkey" was hilarious. He really does.

"Eyepatch and Squinty. Yes, those were really their names. I promise." Pure genuis. xD

Hm, I wonder, what do priests and monkies do when they're alone? =3 This was a grebat oneshot, the humor was just right, perfect. I wonder who the kid he was talking to though, at first you made me wonder if it was his own, but now I'm not so sure. Oh well, it was a well-rounded and beautifully put together piece. >.> I might just have to favorite that.

=O I will! Feel honored, I only favorite the stuff I really love. ;)
-Windy