good story and the last half of the last chapter was hilarious! :D

I didn't realize this was a retelling of Sabrina until Anakin's declaration to Windu that he knew his master loved Padme in chapter 16. It was an enjoyable read, but you went a bit quickly through the falling in love stage. You more told us that Obi-Wan fell for her than showed it.

i know it is old

but it was so great to read that i just had to leave a review

loved the humorous tone and the story

anakin took this all really lightly (considering how he reacted to friendship in ROTS...)

Wow this was a great story. I loved if from start to finish. I like the way you wrote the story star wars style of Sabrina. I saw a little of both H B version and HF version in it.

are you implying a tad bit of yoda/mace?

heeheehee

yay!

wow...that was some nice baiting by Anakin!

that part of the movie always makes me cry!

twins, eh?

well, he has crappy timing!

wonderful! loved it!

like the description of his living space

;)

love dorme!

perfect chapter!