Oh, this is so beautiful. I started choking up near the end, and that is what makes this such a great story. You've reached the ultimate objective of writing - making your audience feel.

The only thing I found a little off about it is the paragraph structure. It is a bit wordy and easy to get lost in, but this is still a lovely story.

... Heh... I wrote a fanfic quite a few years ago in which Yuan tried to steal Kratos' coin pouch and that was how they met... and I actually used the line, 'You're a terrible thief,' or something to that effect.
Interesting... this makes me want to start up my story again...

So SAD! Poor Yuan. God, now I'm depressed. Great job. Very detailed.

So sad... But happy at the same time... Is that even possible?

THAT WAS SO CUTE ;O;
I love Yuan~ Awesome one-shot, nya.

;_; huh, funny...maybe it's just the night I've had, but I'm crying too...

A story as beautiful as the artwork that inspired it. Well done; it's rare to see a romance without a 'happily ever after', and rarer still to see such a romance that isn't really a tragedy.

Geez... that was beautiful... I loved it

Lengthy review on the forums. Great job ne-san!

Ahaha! You are a clever one! You must have realised that the worlds, when they are joined, are indeed called Aselia! Have you played Tales of Phantasia and compared the Sylvarant and Tethe'alla maps to the map in ToP?

Also, the story. Very cute and sagely! Your quotes are very thought provoking! Well done.

*snifflesniffle* My poor boys. *gives chocolate to both boys so they feel better* That was good. (I don't really know if you need the intense KxY warning at the top though. One could just interpret this as strong friendship, if one were so inclined.)

Omigawsh! I'm am so bummed out right now. Ahaha! That's good! That's good! A writer is to convery his/her's feelings out onto the audience, and very well done!

I find the paragrahs a bit.. wordy, and one can get lost in them if they are non too careful. But fear not! I love it.

Wasn't really expecting that they actually did seperate (well, duh, Seren, read the title!) well, I was and I didn't want it to happen, but it still was all good! Loved it, such emotion. Deep. Everything that made this a good fic.
Thanks~

Seren~