interesting story question though is there going to be a second chapter if there is please tell me

that was good, a few spelling mistakes, but still good and yet...sad! I almost cried (I cried during the notebook) I give it a: 3

hey ill fuck with you

I don't mean to be harsh, but this wasn't good at all. It might have been good if you knew the characters better. You know, to the point where you know their pasts enough, and how they react in certain situation, etc. Also, learn to spell. The spelling and grammar in this was horrible, and I won't beg your pardon for saying so. A spell-checker wouldn't hurt, and perhaps it would clear away the large amount of typos you made, too. *shakes head* Maybe you shouldn't do GW fics just yet . . .

Who's Adara? Trowa only has 1 sis. That's Catherine, and she's older.