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Reviews For: Green Apple Elixir and Sugared Vanilla - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

ares88
2008-09-24
ch 1,
abusenice story. But to be honest, Yaoi parts really made me feel bad. But your story and your call.
BlackButterfly
2008-08-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseaw, this is so cute! Please write some more, I love your style)
NowYouWantMe123
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseThis Was my Favorite NaruIno Fic in Ever, You have to be a great Author, and I love how your storys are long and telling, They R AWESOME!( and a little freaky...) NaruIno Rock! Keep Writin...Please! (^_^)
Kathryn
2008-02-09
ch 1, anon.
abuseI hope Ino stops drinking and smoking. It makes her look like a bad role-modle.

If she stopped, and naruto didn't do it, That'd be awsome.

I'll read more, and i love this story. keep up the work
hellhound-d.o.w.
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuseVery interesting... Always a fan of Ino/Naruto and that was a more plausible way of them getting together than most I've seen. Humorous as well. Nice.
brocksboo
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abusenvcjslsdm WHY WHY are you such a good writer? Your words tempted me like freaking SATAN, and I had to read this, even though I hate the pairing, and NaruHina is the OTP of the world, but my belief has been shaken to the very core. D: That was so good, and... BAH HUMBUG *Jumps around in irritated circle* You make my life so difficult. D:
But a very good job, regardless. ^ ^
~Amunet 8D
Fields of View
2007-12-04
ch 1,
abuselol!! that. was so cute hahahaha (and kind of crackish funny XD) I never read a NaruIno before, and I must say, I love this one! and you manage to keep them in character too- ahh, brilliant youth!
SkyMaiden
2007-12-02
ch 1,
abuseLMAO this was absolutely hilarious and it was a really good read. I enjoyed it.
madteen66
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseyou are by far the most amazing person for writing this even more amazing fic...^_^
NiGHTxRECONNAiSSANCE
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseluv it! are you gonna add another chapter?
Nozomi-sama
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseKakashi and Sasuke! -fangirl squeal-

Uh...okay, on to the actual review. You could tell it was kind of not current, since the writing is totally different from how you usually write things. But it made me laugh, so I definitely enjoyed reading it. Naruto and Ino, those two blondes make me laugh so much. ^^
lori0108
2007-10-18
ch 1,
abuseit is awesome
Jhallel
2007-10-11
ch 1,
abuseyay, good fic!

Altho I dont know if sakura was really in character, but who cares! alternate pairing Luurvv!
Useful76
2007-09-21
ch 1,
abuseVery cute for the NaruIno moments. Very VERY disturbing with Sasuke and Kakashi. Bleh!

Perhaps a sequal though to see what happens with NaruIno and SakuLee.
stillframe shattered
2007-09-09
ch 1,
abuseWow. This is hysterical, and very well written. I love it^^
+favourite
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