   Wyntirsno 5/27/09 . chapter 8That was a good story, but your right it was kind of an abrupt ending. I like all your elemental stories tho, I wish there were more. |
| KoolerKid24 9/25/07 . chapter 8 Yeah,I liked the story, but i think you should've had another chapter to end the story. Or you could have a sequal. it would be cool! |
| Story Watchdog 8/5/07 . chapter 8 Nice story. But is it really yours or did you steal this one too? |
| LuvCBLuvJP 3/16/07 . chapter 8 Ok story, needs a better ending! |
| warriors-icefire 3/16/07 . chapter 8 Wow, that was confusing but I finally got it. I love your Zack X Rikku and Cody X Rumiku parings! |
| Johnny Solstice 3/16/07 . chapter 8 Oh, it wasn't that bad. Great story! |
| 769085 3/15/07 . chapter 8 Oh, no, it was a good ending. Really good story! |
| warriors-icefire 3/12/07 . chapter 7 Great story! Update soon! |
| 769085 3/12/07 . chapter 7 Amazing chapter, it's really great! Update soon! |
| warriors-icefire 3/11/07 . chapter 6 WOW! Awesome story! I love it and can't wait for the next chapter soon! |
| 769085 3/10/07 . chapter 6 Wow, it's so cool! Awesome!
Hehe, it kinda surprised me that Zack had guns, but it was a good chapter.
Update soon! |
| 769085 3/6/07 . chapter 5 Wow! Awesome chapter, really! Please, update soon! |
| Johnny Solstice 3/5/07 . chapter 4 This is great. Update ASAP! |
| Johnny Solstice 3/3/07 . chapter 3 Thi is another great chapter! |
| 769085 3/3/07 . chapter 3 Oh man! Awesome chapter, and full of emotions! Update soon! |
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