Wow. To all honest to God, I did cry. ^-^' This has got to be the best that I have read. Even though I could not keep up with the updates I still intended on reading this to the end.

By the way, Good luck with your schooling. It's kinda sad you will no longer be writing... or at least now at this point time I guess... x_x

But I did love the Series from the 1st to the 3rd.
Loca.

What a gorgeous ending... it's inspired me ^_^

Man am I ever glad I read this series, thanks, Exodia!

No!! This was SO good! It's sad to know that there wont be no more to it...the way everything ended...woah. I'm just speachless. I loved it so much, even the heartwrenching ending...I can't believe it was the last and final chapter! ( Still undergoing shock)...

AH this was SO GOOD! i can easily tell you i'm crying my eyes out. i was not excepting the ending there. but in the end something in the back of my mind was telling me they all were going home. it ripped my heart out that the girls had to leave their dearest friends. but it was for the best that tala and even robert pushed Vega in the portal. for if they didn't i feel like bad things could have happened. well i just want to say you did a wonderful job, i mean words can't explain how good this trilogy was. at at his moment i'm gonna go back and add all three of your books to my favorite story's list.

Wow. I can't believe that's it over. I really thought they would all stay, you know? Still, I was hoping there would be more moments between Kai and Charly and Vega and Tala. They were sort of skipped to concentrate more on the main storylines. Apart from that I enjoyed every minute!

Good luck with law school!

I tell you..it feels like the end of an era. I can't believe I just read the last chapter. Its been going for about four years now like you said..but it feels like I just started reading yesterday...and yet..its over. I can't help but be a little sad.

I remember that I was reluctant to read WFE at first. As at the time I really didn't care for Beyblade or fanfiction. You asked me a couple of times just to take a look at it, and me being a big softy..couldn't resist. Now, four years later..I'm so glad you asked me. Its been one heck of a fun ride. I did have as much fun reading as you did writing.

Also I want to thank you for counting me as part of your "writing staff" Though I really can't take credit for too much it was all you, really. I just had a couple of rare good thoughts that seemed to work out. Still, it was fun being there while you were typing..and getting clips ahead of time. I felt like I was part of something. ^_^

So I guess what I really want to say..is just thank you. Thank you for writing, thank you for asking me to read, thank you for letting me be on the down low with what was going on. It was a blast! I do look forward to any and all of your future projects.

But I'm rambling I guess..I probably should talk about the final chapter, huh? Sorry..I gush sometimes. Just had to say that, though. :3

Vega woke up..and the world stopped. He He, well not really..but everyone dropped what they were doing and rushed to her side. Well ok..not Kaosu and Farrell..they were already there. It was a funny scene too. Charly almost had to pry them off of her. XD

No sooner had she awakened..than Miy appears. The council of demon lords have taken an interest in her. Guess its not too big of a surprise. Well..there were two surprises anyway..they thought she was Johnny's bride, and Brooklyn came to terms with both of his sides. That was nice.

Then there was Tala. While Vega decided she wasn't going back home..he pretty much decided that yeah..she was. And Robert gave him a hand. That couldn't have possibly been easy for him.

It was probably hard deciding on how to end the story. I rather enjoyed the way you decided to end it. It wasn't exactly a happy ending, but it wasn't really a sad one either. It falls I think under the bitter-sweet category.

While the girls finished what they set out to do..they did lose something dear to them. Not ever story can have a fairy tale ending. And really..I don't mind. They lived happily ever after..is not always the best way to go. I think it was a good way to end the story.

Well I babbled on far too long. Thank you again for a wonderful story.

So...Looking forward to future projects, keep up the good work! ^_^

Last chapter, huh? Mahnn this has come a long way. It seems weird to think it'll have ended the next time I read it. Hope you get that conclusion out soon though!

woot woot... ok whatever this was good... sorry i'm in a crappy mood

So here we are..then there was one. Only one chapter left. Its hard to believe. I say its gonna feel like the end of an era when that last chapter is done. I do feel just a little sad. But I'm getting ahead of myself. I should concentrate on the current chapter, huh? XD

Well here we go..

So Gallaxia and Eteros show up. Well ok..they showed up last chapter..but still. It becomes clear why they showed up.Its nice that the other Illiminati were allowed to have a second chance at life. I'm confident things will have changed for them. Being dead does that to a person. I would think anyway. That it would give a person a whole new outlook on life if they came back.

That was kind of a shocker about Miy. I had a feeling something was up with that guy. But I had no idea what it was. So he was actually an apostle, huh? Well with his kind of power..guess its not too surprising. That little part about him calling Robert 'milord" all the time in a sarcastic tone was funny as well.

Then there was Vega, Farrell, and Robert. Vega is still in critical condition. Robert at least takes her back to his castle so she can rest. Which is a good idea..until he runs into Farrell. Who..is extremely upset at Robert..blaming him for Vega's condition.

Farrell acted on those emotions as well. Even though he hasn't recovered fully..he was still more than a match for Robert..and his castle wall as well. That was quite a move. Robert was lucky, I felt. Farrell is pretty scary when he's furious. Good scene, though.

If Kira hadn't of interfered..things probably would not have gone as well for Robert. Even if he makes Farrell pay for the repairs, Robert should probably thank Kira. I think so anyway.

Well as always, looking forward to the next..and..well I guess last chapter. Can't wait to see how it ends! Keep up the good work. ^_^

That was amazing! I loved every bit of the action and it was really well written. Hope you update with the last two chapters soon!

Well here it is, the outcome of the final battle..and what a blast it was. (bad pun, yes..also intended) If I had to sum up this chapter in just one word, I'd say that word would be KABOOM!! Maybe that doesn't even do it justice. After all, there was more than just a huge explosion.

First off, I always like your descriptions for not only transformation sequences, but spell chanting as well. I think both paint a very lovely picture. You really have a knack for it.

Vega's taunting of Lue was probably my favorite part. It was great. Its always nice to see the villain..once feared by all..reduced to a quivering mass of jello-like substance. Almost literally in this sense. And that was just from the verbal threats. Nevermind Brooklyn standing behind her ripping the souls out from her body. That probably hurt as well.

Then there was the Crimson Void Magnum. As I said to someone the other day, excessive force is the best kind of force. I still stand behind that statement. Nothing better than a world ending blast to make sure your foe is wiped from existance. Overkill, its fantastic! While the CVM didn't end the world so to speak, it still packed a good punch. I rather enjoyed the fireworks. :3

Afterward, though..things weren't too bright for Vega. Losing the transformation, plunging into a freefall, and barely clinging to life. After a stunt like that, I'm not surprised..but still..hope she pulls through. Also its good to see that Djinn is on his way back to Farrell. Thats good news at least. Also good news, Kaosu and Wolborg have rejoined the living.

The end threw me for a loop. Wasn't expecting that at all really. I'm anxious to see whats going to happen. Again though, nice description on the transformations.

Well as always, looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. ^_^

I can't wait to see the ending ^_^

oh what happens now?

noo the story i almost done...

yes things are looking up