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sasunaru2themax
2009-11-14 . chapter 1
sorry i spent ages on Livejournal and i found the story on here. hahaha :P Love this btw.
hanakisa
2009-11-10 . chapter 7
I love this!! I know if i was put in this camp i would be the most difficult camper there lol! I would refuse to change! Please update soon! I love this story its a great idea!
Lioness-of-Tortall-7
2009-10-20 . chapter 7
Amazing work! I was flipping through people's profiles, not actually expecting to find something good, and I saw this. It sounded interesting, but I didn't think it would actually be GOOD. LOL. No offense intended- it's just that most people screw this kind of stuff up. Sasuke's actually in character (which almost no one can manage to do) and you've worked everyone in nicely. Update soon! The only thing I would suggest working on would be... Um... IDK. That's what I get for trying CC. LOL. Keep writing!
LOT7
Swamp of fire
2009-10-05 . chapter 1
Just to tell you but you spawned a clone! well not exactly, but someone was inspired by your story. I wasn't sure if you were aware of that fact. It's named Only God Knows, by (I'm not going to write his full name it could be offensive) Naruto * Riding Syndrome. (I think you can guess the missing word?)

Anyways I like your writing style and your story is pretty original.

Good work so far and good luck on the rest!

Sincerely, -Swamp
NonConformingAngel
2009-09-28 . chapter 7
Ooh!
I just read everything that you've written so far in one go, and I've gotta say, I'm LOVING it.
Things are really getting interesting now, and I can't wait to see what Tsunade/Jiraiya/Kakashi/Iruka's background stories are.
They're obviously different from the other counsellors at the camp. :O Maybe they're undercover! XD
(Before I let my imagination get the better of me, I'm going to shut up. XD)

Anywho.
Yeah. Really loving this story, your writing style and vocabulary are superb, and you definitely should continue writing.

-NonConformingAngel
DQ XD
2009-09-19 . chapter 7
OMG DID YOU DIE OR FALL IN A COMA OR SOME CLOSE TO YOU DIED OR FOUND OUT YOU'RE A VAMPIRE OR GET SET ON FIRE OR GET INTO A CAR CRASH OR DROWN OR GET KIDDNAPPED OR RAPED OR BLINDED OR MADE MUTE OR GONE INSANE OR THROWN IN JAIL OR HAVE CANCER OR JUST FOUND OUT THE GUY YOU LOVED WAS CHEATING WITH YOUR BFF OR LOST YOUR HOUSE OR LAST YOUR JOB OR ARE DEAD 'COUSE OF AN ASPRIN OVER DOSE OR GOT RAN OVER BY A CAR OR HAD YOUR COMPUTER STOLEN OR HAS STAFF OR GOT CHOPPED INTO LITTLE PICES BY A CRAZT AX MURDER OR OR OR OR WORSE... YOU FELL IN LOVE...
WITH A NEW STORY AND YOU FORGOT ABOUT THE STORY AND ALL YOUR LOYAL FANS... NO! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO US WE TRUSTED YOU!

P.S You did a great job on the story... just don't leave everyone hanging. Can't wait till next update. :D
DQ XD
Ellisama
2009-09-09 . chapter 7
AWESOME! I can't wait for the update!
MoshiMoshiQueen
2009-09-04 . chapter 7
Keep up the great work! Love it!
MoshiMoshiQueen
2009-09-04 . chapter 6
Nice work!
MoshiMoshiQueen
2009-09-04 . chapter 5
I hope that Iruka isn't one of those crazies!
MoshiMoshiQueen
2009-09-04 . chapter 4
Well I guess Sasuke will never go home then. He will never be able to please his father.
MoshiMoshiQueen
2009-09-04 . chapter 3
Very hot chappie!
MoshiMoshiQueen
2009-09-04 . chapter 2
I don't think I could manage not being able to talk for three whole days. It really sucks for them. I hope they didn't physically force Sasuke.
MoshiMoshiQueen
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
Great first chapter. I can't wait to read more!
Kobaka
2009-09-03 . chapter 5
i love this story. u ae an amzing writer. being gay my self its hard to read it some times. but still one of the best storys i ve ever read.i just can beleave someone could do that to there child. contiune the great work
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