Actually you wrote the hebrew translation pretty good, only it would be more accurate as 'timseri lo dash mimeni'.
my first language is Hebrew so you can be sure that's how you shouold qrite it.
love the story so far, and i will be keeping on reading

that's the end? I hope there's a sequel. I really enjoyed reading it.

Loved it! Amazing story-wrapping:)
Just one thought, if the Haitian is around, how is Claude invisible? And how can Peter mimic Hana's power?
Greta story.

*claps loudly* great fic! Sorry i haven't reviewed in ages, but RL sucks! I loved this story! The characters were very close to their Monday night counterparts so congrats on that! Great fic!

Great story. Nice to have something to read during the break, and I hope you keep writing Heroes fanfics. Good luck!

I hope you make a sequel. And, yes, I know I never actually posted a review for you before, but your story helped me get trough the long hiatus for Heroes.

Please, help your fans out, make another sequel. Preferably with Claude in it too somehow. I'm upset that he's not on she show anymore.

Thanks for the great story.

Signed,
Ms. Kitty

Awesome ending! Is there gonna be a sequel?

*Squee* Yay! For the return of Claude!

Okay, fangirl-ism aside love the story, can't wait to see what you'll write next!

OMG!! AWESOME STORY

YEY Hana!!

Oh, I'm liking it...but where's Claude? Hope he comes into your story soon.

Nice. An easy read. I like the way you've opened Sylar's character up. You're working towards the "misunderstood" angle, I take it?
Did you pick up the concept of "Sylar's older brother" from somewhere, or was it pure inspiration? Either way, I like it.
And yes, the flashback worked. Could possibly have done with a little more meat afterwards, but I think it works well enough as it stands.

i like it

great chapter

Very Good Story. I thought it was very good that you had Sylar hear Peter's footsteps in previous chapters - very smart. I like almost all aspects of the story so far. I can't wait till everything plays out! Keep em comming

I like this very much. It's interesting to read these characters in written form, since apart from the comic novels, we really don't know their thoughts. And I liked the way you had Sylar really be alive - typical Sylar fashion.

The only thing is that first, the chapters are a bit short. I would try and make them longer. Second, Angela Petrelli seemed almost too friendly... she's even borderline nonchalant with Peter, who she's claimed is her favorite son. I can't see her saying "welcome home".

Finally, although I liked the wrapping up in the last part, I also thought it happened too quickly. It was well written, but people don't normally reveal tidbits all at once.

All in all, very good, and I hope to see more!