This story is awesome. Please keep going!

this is such a good story please write more

I can't believe no one has ever reviewed this.

Your work is amazing. You've got a great eye for detail and a nice story line as well. You did mispell Tia Dalma's name a few times in the begining, but other than that it's a great piece of work. Please don't stop writing, you should really finish it. I want to know how this ends.