That was so sweet! Cute!
Aw... Your beginning was really good. I love it how you describe a painting ;]
But I didn't get one thing. You know I'm stupid and all. So could you explain? In the painting Fuji painted Ryoma with his eyes closed? Or what?

kwaii! Fuji really is a tensai, ne? ;)

sweet.

aw picture perfect! FujiXRyo rocks so thankyou!

i dunno why but i love this line:
"Ne, Fuji-senpai...aren't you finished yet?" Ryoma asked, his voice hinting plain annoyance.

Interesting read. I like the evolution of Fuji's hobby, especially with Ryoma as the subject. Very cute interactions.

...just a couple of things I noticed while reading it:
I think here it would be "he grew tired of" or "he began to find photography tiresome"

Just wondering if this was meant obe a fullstop...?

Hopefully you'll be writing many more PoT, if not FujiRyo, stories.
:)

very nice... ^__^ loved it!! ^.*

I read your workjust now.
I just like it.Its description is wonderful!
I guess it have not ended yet,huh?
Just go ahead!!Great!

i've said this one, n i'll say it again... you are IN LOVE with OOC! hahah. ^p^ seriously! it's your specialty! i still love your stories though. but... why the HECK are they getting SHORTER?! >O< wish u wrote more and sorry for the late review. ja ne!

YAY! SUCH KAWAII FUJIRYO! I loved it! Good choice of hobby for Fuji's alternate. I would probably have chosen it too since they are similar for Fuji. YAY THRILL PAIR FUJIRYO! I loved the short story!

I like it.

I don't know why but I'm fond of fanfics involving some paintings and such.

:D Keep it up!

Ah, that truly was an exquisite oneshot fic that you've written. I'm quite inspired by it. I'm glad that you sent it to me, by the way. I don't like to dig through the archives that much anymore. Not much time you see, since school is taking such a toll on me now. Ah, how I wish life were much simpler.

Anyhow, back to your story. I really like the way you wrote it: clean (well, most of it, anyways) and detailed.

I look forward to more of your stories. Feel free to send them to me, 'kay? And if you have any recommendations of stories that you really like, send them to me ^_^.

~The Unreal Phantom

I enjoyed this story, it's very well written.

Although I've never seen Ryoma say "woah" before, even in matches (or have I?), but that's fine.

I think you got both Fuji and Ryoma in character well instead of most people making Fuji completely sadistic. Kudos for you.

Aww, that was cute!!

A few words should be changed: "incredibly" instead of "incredulously" but otherwise, this was very good. I like how you described the scene and Fuji's painting. :)

Hmm...very gentle shonen-ai fic. Quite nicely written.

hope to see more fics from you. ^^

-Gwyn

EEK! Cuteness!
it's good. I loved reading the first paragraph. :D
now the ending just sounds Cheesy. Mmn... Cheese...M... anyways *shakes head*

But i like! :D