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Reviews for: Burdens and Responsibilities
secret25 5/23/07 . chapter 1
you could...if you would allow me to

so sweet!
lemon-and-chai2B 4/17/07 . chapter 1
After reading your other fic, I had to come read this one! Very cute, especially at the end, smooth development. Am waiting for more TezuFuji fics onegaishimasu XD
angelDC 4/1/07 . chapter 1
touching...:)
whee 3/21/07 . chapter 1
i luv this fic:)realy luv it...hehe..hope can read more..or a sequel mayb_
unknownperson999999 3/1/07 . chapter 1
AWW! this was undeniably Sweet! Like apples! :D I really like it!
MazdaKitsune 3/1/07 . chapter 1
Kyaa! Kawaiiness!
Old Fiat 3/1/07 . chapter 1
Good show! I liek it a lot. If you like TezuFuji, I just wrote one... 'Free'. :)

There was only one awkard sentence:

"Did I hear what I just heard?"

I think something like, 'Did I just hear that?' or 'Did he just say what I thought he said?'

Good work! 10/10!

-Old Fiat
Animestar73 3/1/07 . chapter 1
BEAUTIFUL! i love TezuFuji actully i'll pretty much read anything that has Tezuka, Fuji and Ryoma in it! Hehehe!

I really like it! I thought it was gonna be angst for a second there but BOOM there comes the happy ending! *gives you invisable hug* really really really really nice!

*Sorry just a little high from shoveling snow... don't ask*

heheh Good Job!

Animestar73*
shiroi-yume 3/1/07 . chapter 1
Sweet! I love how you totally captured their personalities!

And, a happy belated birthday to Fuji-chan!

Great fic
blufox 3/1/07 . chapter 1
Ain't it obvious that I love making double reviews? Hahaha. I dont know, but I really feel that leaving a review here and in your LJ is the right thing to do *I nod with conviction*

Anyway, I love the way Tezuka implied that he still wants to be w/ Syuu. *dreams happily*

Also, I enjoy the part when Tez would hug Syuu from the back before morning practices when no one's around. That simply wants to make me cry out of my desperation of not having a boyfriend. (Im not even an ideal child damnit, there's no reason for me to hold back at all! Fufufu.)

Still, I love it. :)
maldita08 3/1/07 . chapter 1
not bad. it's not too sappy and most of all it doesn't make my tootj ache. you ought to write more FujixTezuka fics!
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