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| julie fraser 2008-03-13 ch 7, anon. | abusegreat story loved it, can't wait for more. please post soon. |
| won't be the Victim 2008-02-13 ch 7, | abuseAw that was a mean way to end it! I need the rest asap man! |
| Red Tail Cartoon 2007-09-29 ch 7, | abusehm pleasae continue |
| 3Greaser4Life3 2007-04-25 ch 7, | abuseVery good. Keep it up. I like this story. It's very interesting. |
| xocrazililkelox 2007-04-22 ch 2, | abusegreat story please update soon please pretty please? |
| Pictures 2007-04-05 ch 6, | abuse:) I like this story. ahaha, that sounds like me when I go to church, well when I do my rarely visits that is. :) It made me laugh a little. UPDATEE! |
| All About Ritz 2007-04-04 ch 6, | abusewhos mike?update soon |
| CASSIE.D 101 2007-03-29 ch 5, | abusegreat update, i love this story, update sooner next time! |
| xmusecliox 2007-03-18 ch 5, | abuseooh, that was much better! No spelling mistakes. lol I find it sad the the baby's so cute and lovely but the mother's a complete cow...:) |
| xocrazililkelox 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abusegreat story please update soon. |
| Girlz-Rule 2007-03-17 ch 5, | abusegreat new chapter, update soon:) |
| BellaEliza 2007-03-12 ch 4, | abusei like this chapter! |
| xmusecliox 2007-03-11 ch 4, | abuseI like it, pretty good so far. Just be careful of thee ole spelling, I recommend my favourite friend...the spell check. lol Maybe a bit more character depth for kat, but she's shaping up well. She isn't a Mary sue, a success in itself! hehe anyway update. I think you'd be better having a go at editing some earlier chapters as well. Small things like spelling puts people off and I know how much we all love reviews :) Wow, that was long. |
| Swizzlet-Schiz 2007-03-11 ch 4, | abuseaw c'mon,update real soon please |
| HunnieWeAreMadeFromVodkaAnd... 2007-03-10 ch 4, | abuseI LOVE IT YOUR A GREAT WRITER AND UPDATE SOON PLEASE PWETTY PWEASE LOL GREAT JOB SO FAR |