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Gater101
2008-01-16 . chapter 1
Du-ude. That was amazing. So cute, and heart warming and just exactly what the doctor ordered.

Thanks.
Scifan
2007-06-28 . chapter 1
Such a sweet story and of course Loved the infirmary scene with John and Teyla. Awesome job!
CharmedAli
2007-04-24 . chapter 1
beautiful, love it
Camerine
2007-04-08 . chapter 1
Beautiful! I really like it. Not like anything I've read before, and you really wrote it well. XD

~Camerine
Wedjatqi
2007-03-23 . chapter 1
Hiya, I wandered over to FFnet to check out Major Santos! I had actually read this when you posted it first and it is a memorable piece. Very enjoyable and liked the red herring of the thoughts of Major Santos at first. Poor Santos. Great heartache piece.
johnteylafan
2007-03-03 . chapter 1
Great story Camy...gave you feedback for this on GW...but anyway...
You really had me at the beginning...I was a little confused to say the least *lol*
Then again what did he think...a woman passing up John Sheppard...yeah right...not gonna happen with Teyla *lol*
Thanks for sharing...
sydney1965us
2007-03-02 . chapter 1
Wow, this made me sigh one of those long drawn out sighs.
jtjaforever
2007-03-02 . chapter 1
You really did a WONDERFUL job w/this. I loved how you had us going at the beginning. Excellent job.
DevineM27
2007-03-02 . chapter 1
You know I love it. Poor guy, but what did he expect. Who in their right mind would pass up John Sheppard for some young buck?
Nickus
2007-03-01 . chapter 1
Colonel Sheppard sleeping soundly next to his beya. *smiles* Ptb take note, follow Camy's lead on future infirmary scenes.

Really touching story, brilliant writing style, beautiful Camy.

Oh and yes, sneaky. lol Thank you as always.
ayrstar
2007-03-01 . chapter 1
Very beautiful and well written. Poor Major Santos, in love with Teyla only to find out that Sheppard is in love with her and that she in turn loves John as well.
imaginary iby
2007-03-01 . chapter 1
Oh, very nicly written! Sneaky, too!

I liked the description at the end in particular, it was very emotive.

Well done!
OMGirl
2007-03-01 . chapter 1
CAMY!...omg omg...that was 'beautiful'...^_^...poor Major Santos...

Loved John's reaction, and when he tell him he better get transfered to earth...^_^...*lol*...And the end scene...*faint*
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