you don't need to be observent to notice and understand that part ^.^ hm i like this FF. so much feeling&angsty love it. (yup i'm sadistic like that)

That was absolutely perfect, I love it. It's odd, because it was pretty short, but every line was packed with feeling. It didn't need to be any longer, you got everything that was required [and more] across. amazing.

I liked it a little sad, but the ending it could be his life ends, like this moment in life with him near his love has ended. Thats what I was thinking... Are you going to write more?

u don't know what ur own stuff means?

An interesting little AU. I quite enjoyed it. Almost wish it was a little longer. Any chance you'll be expanding this?

this is an interesting concept. Poor renji, he just can't win. I'm glad you added a note of explanation after the story, it helped clear some things up. good job :)