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Anicomicgeek
2008-07-23
ch 45,
abusePretty cool chapters. Can't wait to see how Spidey and the Green Goblin throw down. Pretty good work.:)
Superspyder CJ
2008-07-20
ch 45,
abuseAWESOME!

Great start to the battle. Loved Spidey's line: "Here we go again." Guess he's getting used to it now.

I'm trying to think of ideas for the battle, so you'll hear from me soon, if I'm not working.

Thanks for the update,

-CJ
gen x
2008-07-09
ch 44, anon.
abuseNot bad
Superspyder CJ
2008-07-09
ch 44,
abuseHey, it's me, ADogg.

Sorry for not reviewing sooner, I'm getting used to my job. But hey, that's life...

Spidey's the one? Oh my God, we're in the Matrix! Just joking,but seriously, great job. I like how you write Norman, he's just right the way he is.

Can't wait for more,

-CJ
Anicomicgeek
2008-07-08
ch 44,
abusePretty nice work. Clever way of introducing Mystqiue. I gotta be honest, I wasn't expecting Archangel, but I'm kinda glad he did. Good work.:)
Superspyder CJ
2008-07-01
ch 43,
abuseYou did it again!

Great job on this one. I especially liked the conversation between MJ and Peter:

“No, no, Pete, its fine.” Mary-Jane says cutting Peter off by gently grabbing his arm. The smile she gives him is still present, as well as how much she cherishes him and that huge heart of his. However, she soon gives him a curiously expression. “But…you didn’t even like punching Iron Man?”

Peter was just about to answer, but stops and contemplates before he does so. “Well, THAT was fun, but to be fair…”

Who HASN'T dreamed of punching Iron Man nowadays?

So, Emma needs their help. This should be interesting.

Thanks for the update, bro.

-CJ

P.S. I've been trying to update, but I have summer school, so...XD
Anicomicgeek
2008-06-30
ch 43,
abuseWow, nice job. It's interesting to see how things are going at the Bugle in this story and it's nice to see Emma. Nice job on the chapter. Good work.:)
Anicomicgeek
2008-06-21
ch 42,
abusePretty cool work on this. Interestint touch having the simulation ended with a 60s-theme resturant. Can't wait to see how the cliffhanger plays out. Nice work.:)
Superspyder CJ
2008-06-18
ch 42,
abuseSo Spidey jumped on a fighter jet, fought Omega Red, Spot, Rhino, and the Shocker, all to get to a diner? There better be some damn good cheeseburgers there...XD

Seriously though, great chapter. Iceman doesn't really like Spidey, does he? Jerk. >_<

Yes! You used my idea of Tigra as a spy? Is she spying on X-Factor?

Very good job. I wanna see more!

-CJ
Anicomicgeek
2008-05-27
ch 41,
abuseSorry I haven't reviewed lately. Nice work on all of the chapter, though. I kinda liked the dig about Batman & Robin in this chapter. Can't wait to see where the whole Peter/MJ/Kitty subplot goes. Also can't wait to see how the react to the Green Goblin. Keep up the good work.:)
Superspyder CJ
2008-05-26
ch 41,
abuseHey, it's me. Thanks for considering my idea, man. I was just
reading Civil War(what a coinky-dink) and it popped in my head, so...

Nice job on this one. You write the normal stuff just as well as the fighting stuff! That's real great, not many writers can do that.

Oh boy, all this pent-up anger and fustration between MJ and Kitty is KILLING me! Are they gonna fight or something? Just curious.

Thanks for the update,
-CJ
Superspyder CJ
2008-05-18
ch 40,
abuseCongrats on making it to the big 40!

Haha, Spidey and the other kids have to go to school? Ah, sucks for them. They probably get all the education they need fighting bad guys.

What's this with Doc Strange and the key? Sounds like more action's on the way...

Thanks for the update,
-CJ
Superspyder CJ
2008-05-13
ch 39,
abuseScary...

Nice job describing Peter's nightmares. Especially the way Norman was demolishing him! Brutal, man.

I wonder...is the end a foreshadowing for a certain symbiotic villian? Ah well, guess I'll have to find out.

Until next time,
-CJ

P.S. I've been out reading "reference material" for my Spidey fic, so don't worry. The update is coming soon.
Anicomicgeek
2008-05-09
ch 38,
abuseWhoa, I saw expecting to see Norman stay behind the scenes for a while longer. I guess he's throwing down the gauntlet. Nice choices for the new Ultimates members. Good work.:)
Superspyder CJ
2008-05-08
ch 38,
abuseMy friend, I think you've outdone yourself!

Yeah, the part with Norman becoming the Green Goblin was cool. Very innovative, having him ride a giant flaming bat instead of the Goblin Glider.

I'm curious about one thing...Why did you call Henry Pym "Triple-Changer"? Casue he sounds like he's wearing Antman armor to me. Just curious.

On another note, I responded to your PM. Was it a good idea? Bad? Needed some work? Just let me know.

Thanks for the update, man.
-CJ
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