Great story! It stayed true to all of the characters and would fit in perfectly as a beginning for Eclipse. If we've voting for it, then I say definatly 'yes' for a sequel.

just fyi you have part of ch1 again in ch2.

i really like this i think u should make a squel maybe

More please?

-whimpers-

Interesting. I would have liked to see more of Sam's decision making. Emily had a point, but then Sam I suppose, also has a point in going to war as well. Do you stretch the rules for a friend, even when anyone else would get the same punishment without a thought? At least, that's the rationale I see behind Sam's decision, anyway. I doubt anything as complicated would be behind Paul's thoughts. LOL.

Well, if you're going to write a sequel for this then, great. If not, it was still a fantastic story and a great read anyway. ;) I really enjoyed this, and I'll be on the lookout for more stuff from you. Keep up the awesome work!

Omg, bad Sam, bad! I can't believe he voted to kill them, I was almost sure he'd agree with Emily! Guess I was wronge. Update soon!

Whoo, cliffie! I love the conversation and the details, and the suspense! Update soon!

I love the characterization of the pack! There were a few typos in this chapter (it looked like you changed a few words and forgot to delete some of the old ones) but it was still amazing! Keep up the great work!

~Zola

Oh I loved this chapter!

"They say love is blind, and I suppose it really is, especially in their situation. And I can’t bring myself to hate either of them, or their family."

That's a great line right there. It's really powerful. I also love Emily's logic and her comparison to her love of Sam and the allusion to Romeo and Juliet. Hooray!

Good job with this chapter! Emily had some really great points, points even I hadn't considered!
I loved it when Sam said, "Those who are undecided, go home and think about it. Paul, go relax." For some reason, that was really funny to me! :)
Thanks!

You brought up some very interesting points there...and I sure hope that the pack doesn't do anything rash. :S Glad you updated quickly. I look foward to reading more again soon! :D

Yes, I'm afraid they are. -_-;

You can't really blame them though - and to be perfectly honest, the Cullen's aren't any better. :S A great chapter! It wouldn't hurt if it was longer, but that's okay - whatever you can manage. :) As usual, I look foward to reading more of your writing. Update again soon!

You did a good job with this chapter! I loved that last part...
(paraphrasing)"Try to see it from Bella's point of view." "No!" :)

Bon chapitre! J'adore!

Really, though, I love this story! And my French class is a waste of time too. :)

Wow, I love how this is starting! Great chapter, I'm on to the next one! *10*