Aw, so in the end Kevin really does consider Ben a friend, even if he does hate him at the moment. ):

Really good.

It's a good story and I like it(I know you put it up probably a billion years ago but i'm reviewing anyway). It's probably one of the best stories I've read.

Ah, I feel warm and bubbly! I never would have thought of a story (let alone a one-shot) like this! Its nice to see the younger Kevin actually going along with Ben's plans for once!

sorry...its interesting and all... but i cant say i understand...

Great story; I do hope you write more of these.

I liked it, it was a great concept. I could see the peeking of potential there, the way Kevin threatened to take Ben off his visitor's list but tentatively made sure Ben would visit him, I have to say it was my favorite part, good work.

I liked this story very much. Even though BEN 10 is just a simple cartoon you captured the characters personality and gave them a little depth. ^^ Write some more, will ya?

I really like it. Maybe you could write more ...

OMFG, it feels like there should be more! DX

even so, it was very well written, and you kept everyone in character very well.

this fic could even be turned into a real hard-core yaoi fic! *o*

Aww!
Nice job! Now I want to know what happens! ^_^

It's nice to see Kevin still in character yet not comepltely an asshole and friends with Ben on some level.

i liked the oneshot, but dude, update perfectly imperfect, NOW!

Aww, this was a wonderful short story. I love the concept of Ben trying to help Kevin out of his ways (I always have) soley for the fact that once, they were friends. This was very well-written, and quite believable, too. :)

I'd say more, but I'm terrible at offering praise...still, I think your work is terrific.

I liked this story. I like how Ben is trying to help his friend. The idea with the strange little magic bag that helps to keep Kevin in his human form.

Its kinda neat how Gwen helped out even though she didn't like the idea of helping Kevin. She did it because Ben asked for it.

This is a great story. Keep up the writing.

very nice. i liked it :D but i don't really like kevin so...i'm not into kevin stories...but this was cool :) good job ;)