I'm sure you don't even read these anymore...it's been such a long time, but here goes. This is a great story, good storyline arc, very believable new character too. It's got just enough pathos to keep a true M/L reader/writer happy! The dialogue and pace of the story is very smooth and so easy to read. Thanks! Too bad I'm coming so late to the DA-verse.

this was really good! Except the last sentence 'I've lost him without ever finding out whether he loved me.' just made me gp "Aw,**!"
It was relly good, and although i refuse to believe that Logan would EVER love anyone apart from Max, this story was good. I wanted a happy ending, Max to come back, and i didn't understand what the 'message' was that they ahd made to Max or something and i dont know what Grace explained but it was really good!

Jayme

Wow. This was great. Something a little different. I like the fact that you kept him in the chair even though he had the exo. Good job.

Tight, incisive writing, compelling, and not one wasted word - what more can a reader ask? Your characterisations, from Logan to Mrs. Moreno are perfect.

Great story. Well written. Fast moving.

Well, for the first like five chapters I was kind of TOTALLY ** that you'd gotten someone else to get with Logan (if you live in sydney - "NOT HAPPY JAN!!")
But the ending was good. Is a sequel coming? Is it here? :)

that was a great story..you have to write a sequal to it..i was reading the first couple of chapters and was like no max is alive..lol..so post another chapter or a sequal and tell me whats up..lol..

Wow! What an incredible story! When I read the first chapter weeks ago, I didn't know if there was going to be any more to it or not. Imagine my surprise when I checked today and found the story complete with 6 chapters in all. This is an incredibly moving story of loss, grief, recovery and renewed hope. You're definitely an author to watch for.

ACK! NO! That can't be the end! Well, if you must end it now, that was a nice way to do it, but...geez. So sad, and so much left unsaid. Not to mention the fact that we still don't know whether Max makes it back to Logan, and whether the people following her catch her, and how Logan would deal with his emotions for the two women should he see Max again, and...oh, all I can say is I really really hope you plan on writing a sequel sometime.

AAAAA! That's all I can say to myself, sitting here reading this story. AAAAA! This installment was soooo good! Nice to see Logan and Grace in different environments, and happy to see them get together since Logan does think Max is dead. Funny lines about Max kicking their asses; she definitely would kick Logan's if he moped rather than moving on. My only beef is that Grace is a chaplain, and yet she seems to think premarital sex is OK. (I'm a Christian and I don't, so this caught my attention.) But you did it wonderfully, it's nice to see them be happy for a while, and I'm glad she's finally getting to know The Secret. Very good installment!

Being a true Max/Logan relationship fan, I didn't care much for the romantic relationship between Logan and Grace--but I guess it's just part of Logan's "recovery plan." I really hope that Max is still alive, and that she is able to get back to Logan.

That was so sad, and so beautifully written.

Wow... that was just... wow... I'm usually opposed to anything besides M/L but I really loved Grace. She was good for Logan but in the end she knew he needed Max. Excellent story. Wouldn't mind a sequel either!

Wow, that was so sad--poor Grace! I guess, since this is the end, we'll never know who was following her. I kept thinking it must be Max, although I'm not sure Max would be that subtle. I enjoyed reading this--it was different, which is refreshing.

that was really good... do you have a sequel in mind? (nudge nudge) :)