okay pretty cool but you should make another chapter like about if they start dating and how.

Oh, wow, I love this! What a great story. It was really well played-out. I didn't think it was weird at all. It's really sweet and realistic, emotive. Good work! This one's going on my fav. stories list!

Lucy

I'm not typically into original characters, but I saw the need for it here. She fit nicely within this oneshot. Also, good characterization of Scott. Thanks for the story!

You created a nice outlet in the form of an original character for Scott to unleash his grief and pain, I really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing.:)

I really like this! :)