| Reviews for Temptation |
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TechNomaNcer28 11/29/11 . chapter 3:D!Oh my!That was such a wonderful fic to read! |
TechNomaNcer28 11/29/11 . chapter 1XD!Haha,nice going there! |
Rock'n'Slash 9/11/08 . chapter 3YAY! I LOVE HAPPY ENDINGS! _ LOVELY! |
the voice of singing clouds 12/22/07 . chapter 3aww! all your stories are so nice! |
SiriusScruffy 7/3/07 . chapter 3Aww! That was sweet. I love how you portrayed Sirius being sorry and Remus being the inncent 'victim' and all. Cute RL4SBnotNT |
MisbehavingBubbles 6/29/07 . chapter 2“Where do all of these ridiculous nicknames come from? What does he call you again? Pong?” PONG ROFL. :D WINN! The spill on the sheets amuse me to no end. If there was anything he hated, it was spills on the explained exasperatedly, standing up from the bed and wrenching off his tie, determined to clean the bed with his Gryffindor tie. “Get that away, Sirius, this isn’t an old-fashioned laundry room, you’ll smudge it! Dammit, Sirius, why butterbeer? Why not water or pumpkin juice? Butterbeer is not permitted on the bed!” love it! |
MisbehavingBubbles 6/29/07 . chapter 1“I – er, I… I think I’ll go help James – with, er… his pants–” He said before Sirius could come up with a witty excuse, and his hand jerked out of hers roughly. LMAO Maybe it wasn’t only the girls who were tempted. of course it's not only the girls... :D Lovely. Love it. :D |
green eyed goddess532 5/9/07 . chapter 3ah so cute! wow im in love haha i like how u never gave that girl a name! m happy sweet ending! |
MinervaEvenstar 3/22/07 . chapter 3Hmm, pretty good. I liked the scene where they both were on either side of the door. |
Mediterranean May 3/14/07 . chapter 3That scourgify charm really doesn't seem to work too well, does it? I loved the story, especially the ending with Sirius winning because he snogged Remus and not another girl. Awesome story! |
rry 3/11/07 . chapter 3HAAHAH! that's so funny! James was so funny/confused at the end! this story's great! Poor Sirius though, he's got a brocken nose! |
Dishwashingsoap 3/10/07 . chapter 3 That's was really good! |
Rubber-duckiesofdoom 3/10/07 . chapter 3great :) really good. Heh, James... I love him... **Duckies |
rekahneko 3/10/07 . chapter 3"My god, she looked even shorter when she was mad." I laughed so hard at this! A wonderful chapter - I really liked how Remus helped Sirius win the bet. Very thoughtful and a good way to balance out breaking his nose the day before. (-8 |
barbaricismymiddlename09 3/10/07 . chapter 2 I love this entire story. Acceptance is one of my fav bands! And I have to say, I loved the entire thing. The song fit really well. And, I liked it that you didn't have to name Sirius' girlfriend. That would have made her seem like an OC character, and well, those are so unreal. Not naming her made her seem real. I also like it how they said 'I like you a lot' instead of 'I love you' cause it's just as cute without the added drama. Those puppies are always cute. :D You should write a new story soon cos you're great entertainment! |