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TheNaggingCube 2008-04-28 ch 12,	abuseI have no idea how I missed this when it first came out. So glad some one mentioned on the john whump LJ. Great bad guy, great Ronon, Rodney, and John stuff. The ending delicious. The potential tag for the fair... oh I hope you wrote it! Off to look.
Roo1965 2007-12-13 ch 12,	abusei loved this fic! sherbert is so cute and i had this great image of him scampering about with the lead trailing... anyway i liked how we got a whumped, tired, aching, sore, limping Sheppard and then he had to save the ship and everyone! great Carson Rodney and ronon interaction as well especially the epilgue on earth. want mreo sherbert! more Shep whump and Ronon at the zoo/fair/rides ( and sherbert!)
sydneydallas 2007-12-08 ch 12,	abuseVery enjoyable story, love John's characterization with his unwavering determination to do his job despite any odds.
jellybean367 2007-09-28 ch 12,	abuseamazing story! Loved it! yeah! :) :)
JackFan2 2007-08-11 ch 12,	abuseI gotta tell you, this has been one of the funnest rides I've ever taken in the comfort of my own home. Loved Sherbert. Loved that John had some pre-whumpage beforehand, and that while wounded, still managed to make it through this crisis. Then, in the end, all three of my favorite guys, John, Ronon and Rodney crashing out at Rodney's place. You know, I could just see that going all to hell.. LOL Now, here's my absolute favoritest thing: No Teyla. Not in the entire story! In truth, her character is starting to rub me a little ... off. I'm not sure I am really her biggest fan come season 4. In truth, they've made her too perfect in her warrior-ness (yea.. I'm going to add that to my personal dictionary) and that's what happened with Carter on Sg1 and why by season 3 I got a little sick of her. And what'd'ya know, we're done with 3 seasons of SGA and Teyla's wearing thin on my nerves. At least with her pregnancy in season 4, they'll actually be making her wear some clothes to cover her increasingly rounding belly. Wel, if you're a fan of hers, and I've just royally ** you off.. I'm very sorry. I tend to rant on stuff, and not at all religated to appropriate times. Anyroad, great story. Great fun. Great whumpage and YOU ROCK!
krysalys 2007-04-27 ch 12,	abusedies This was awesome. Excellent job, hon. Maybe next story you could whump one or more of the others? waggles eyebrows hopefully What a spellbinding story. Thank you! -}-@
PrincessPatrice 2007-03-27 ch 12,	abuseLoved the story plenty of great shep whump. Love Sherbet want to see alot more of him and would love a continuation of Their vacation to see how Ronan likes earth and of course how Sheppard manages having to depend on them...
scifi lemon 2007-03-25 ch 12,	abuseWow, just a totally awesome story. I loved the part about Carson calling to go over the instructions just one more time ;) Classic! I hope you write Ronon at the country fair.
bree1387 2007-03-23 ch 8,	abuseI've been slowly working my way through your story (poor Shep!) and I just had to point out how wonderful this particular dialogue is: “I don't think Beckett would like that,” Ronon said. “Beckett doesn't have to know.” “He will if you end up running into a wall.” This is just so in character for these two is makes me wish you could do some dialogue for the actual show. I got a real kick out of this part. :)
Lilas 2007-03-20 ch 12,	abuseOh, God, YES!! TAG! This was AWESOME! And the end scene was hilarious! Much love! And yay for Sherbet!!
Astraldust 2007-03-20 ch 12,	abuseWonderful story. I adore Sherbet and his interaction with John and Rodney is so cute. Look forward to your next adventure.
Lilas 2007-03-19 ch 1,	abuseI've just started reading it, and I'm loving it, except for the fact that I can't remember which fic Sherbet is from! And it;s driving me insane and impeding me from continuing on until I find it! AARGH! So please? Which one? So I can go read it again and remember how they adopted him?
auntiemeesh 2007-03-17 ch 12,	abuseI ran across a link to this on the sheppard h/c community, over on lj, and I'm glad I did. You did a great job working off the prompt. Lovely Shep whumping. I hope you decide to write that sequel/tag, that would be tons of fun to see. :D
Frisco 2007-03-16 ch 12,	abuseGreat finish! I love Rodney beginning to understand John's call of duty. You did a great job with Ronon's character. Nice tie-in with the SGC personnel. Nice canon comment about the "box". I hope you do a tag with Ronon at the fair. Keep up the good work.
mtee1958 2007-03-16 ch 12,	abuseYou constantly provide us with a great story!! This was fun and gripping and full of Shep whumpage!! You just can't ask for more! Thank you.

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