You captured Tavington very well. I was so sorry to see it end!

Well..I must say that, aside from the slash, I loved it. You were right. I squirmed pretty much the whole way through after the first paragraph. You did an excellent job on capturing every little detail of what each character whas thinking, feeling, smelling, etc. You've always been an amazing writer and I've always respected you and looked to you for examples in how to improve my writing style. Like I said before you did an amazing job, however I'm not big on the whole slash aspect, especially because you made Bordon gay. That made me sad. But it was extremely well written and I loved it.

Rayelyn

That was so Tavington! Oh so cruel! I liked your writing, very clear and youcoveyed the situation very well. :)

Hey! What was that? It's so amazingly different from what I've read by you so far. Supposing that Bordon might be homosexual, this is no doubt a behaviour I trust Tavington to show. He's so mean a man who truly only lives for his own purposes.

I love the way you describe Tavington's eyes in the beginning. This is the colonel we do so fear and love. Now you have chosen Bordon to be the object of Tavington's insidiousness, but he could do the same to a woman and embarrass her deeply. What a tragedy to be refused by this man - for both sexes.

I enjoyed your excursion to this rather delicate subject. Be sure to attempt to apply new methods whenever there's an occasion. You can never know where it will bring you, if you don't venture and try. :-)

*fans herself madly* Hot! Hot-hot-hot!
And I am going to say that only the fact that Tavington KISSED his Captain, and skillfully as well, is telling... a story that Tavington himself does not want to hear. (Am I making any sense? It is very late here) I meant that even well being with a female whore, successfully and satisfyingly, that does not mean that Tavington could not bed a guy. If it would make somehow sense to him, he would.